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[aid] => mick
[title] => without you here
[time] => 2005-03-20 22:45:08
[hometext] => for anyone who feels alone at times.. a very short poem
[bodytext] => Further away I go
your image growing smaller and smaller
Tears fill my eyes
I keep looking back
without you here my world seems so black
JENNI
[comments] => 9
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[ratings] => 10
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[associated] =>
[topicname] => SadPoetry
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without you here
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 10:45:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Further away I go
your image growing smaller and smaller
Tears fill my eyes
I keep looking back
without you here my world seems so black
JENNI
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2005-03-20 22:45:08]
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Re: without you here
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 10:47:54 PM AEST
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| Yea...I've been there. Excellent write. |
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Re: without you here
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 11:01:59 PM AEST
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Oh yeah, I know this masterpeice but no matter how much I wanted him to come back I was thanking god for deliverying me.
I'm sure you've Thank god For unsanswered prayer. I got a gone grip on it after my last split up.
He jus called me bleep, bleep, bleep?????????one time too many and he was on my property
My point being if it's luv nothing separate cha or there's hope as long as there's breathe in the body.
definently a very strong masterpeice in our day-n-age for sure.
huggss,
emy |
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Re: without you here
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:46:48 AM AEST
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Jen this was such a sad sad write, i can so relate to everything you're going through.
This was a stunning write, thanks for posting.
Jane |
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Re: without you here
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:16:27 PM AEST
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ohh, Jenni... this was short, but... it made me want to cry inside for you...
All I can say is... maybe it's just God's plan... maybe it's just for the better...
at least that's how I always hope...
Lots of love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: without you here
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 04:16:45 PM AEST
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| You spoken in such a short poem, but your words are as huge as the sky. great write. |
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Re: without you here
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by Sinned on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 06:37:59 PM AEST
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Short and true
I have walked that road
A lot said wth few words
Nice job
Sinned
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Re: without you here
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:16:26 AM AEST
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| Funny how I am having these same feelings about someone at this very moment. Very moving poem. Great write. |
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Re: without you here
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by Archie on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:39:23 PM AEST
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| O-kay I have to say you popped my happy balloon but I can fill it with air again. Great write but sad. |
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Re: without you here
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 12:26:31 AM AEST
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| very nice poem:) |
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