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the thoughts of you hanging over my head like an ornament,
you eyes are like diamonds and needs somebody to treasure them,
I care about you so much it's beyond any measurement,
know that forever you will be my goddess Aphrodite,
and everyday I see you0I think the feelings gratifying,
just to hold you in my arms and still feel the connection,
I look up to god and thank him for his greatest invention,
because without you-love would be a word often misused,
and with you there-I know there's only room for me to improve,
because without you there would be no reason for me to exist,
and you should know by now-my love for you will never diminish... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 48 [informant] => dvsnme816 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Love of MY Life

Contributed by dvsnme816 on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 01:03:26 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Your body is a temple and needs somebody to worship it,
the thoughts of you hanging over my head like an ornament,
you eyes are like diamonds and needs somebody to treasure them,
I care about you so much it's beyond any measurement,
know that forever you will be my goddess Aphrodite,
and everyday I see you0I think the feelings gratifying,
just to hold you in my arms and still feel the connection,
I look up to god and thank him for his greatest invention,
because without you-love would be a word often misused,
and with you there-I know there's only room for me to improve,
because without you there would be no reason for me to exist,
and you should know by now-my love for you will never diminish...

Copyright © dvsnme816 ... [ 2005-03-20 13:03:26]
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Re: Love of MY Life (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 04:30:51 PM AEST
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Beautiful!! lovley i really like it thats how i feel about my bf. well written!

Re: Love of MY Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 06:07:48 PM AEST
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Well I personally think the receiver of this poem would be incredibly flattered.

It would make an awesome poem placed inside a blank card as a gift. Just a thought.

I couldn't find fault with it but, i'm a fan of stanza's, for it is easier on my old eyes.

Keep writing, and may love continue to blossom in your life.

Kie

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