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Array ( [sid] => 87908 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => withered and broken [time] => 2005-03-18 17:12:39 [hometext] => god loves me,god loves me not,god loves me,god loves me not..... [bodytext] => u pick a flower and cherish it,until it is withered and weak,
you throw it aside no thankful words you have spoken,
the flower lay used,wasted and broken.
u pick a lover and cherish them,until you are withered and weak,
they throw u aside no thankful word have they spoken,
your heart lays used,wasted and broken.
u pick a religion and cherish it,until it is withered and weak,
no truth here u seek,for you can not find ,the pieces are withered and broken,
scattered through your mind. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 19 [informant] => blackholesun [notes] => ||||||| Edited by Moderator_14, for spelling, as requested. ||||||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

withered and broken

Contributed by blackholesun on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:12:39 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

u pick a flower and cherish it,until it is withered and weak,
you throw it aside no thankful words you have spoken,
the flower lay used,wasted and broken.
u pick a lover and cherish them,until you are withered and weak,
they throw u aside no thankful word have they spoken,
your heart lays used,wasted and broken.
u pick a religion and cherish it,until it is withered and weak,
no truth here u seek,for you can not find ,the pieces are withered and broken,
scattered through your mind.

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Re: withered and broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:47:30 PM AEST
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I loved the flow, you had me off for a second with the flowers, but then questioning the relationships with love and religion I saw the flow.

Re: withered and broken (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 10:03:19 PM AEST
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A beautiful peice of writting . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: withered and broken (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 12:20:56 PM AEST
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LOVE IT!!!!!!! Wow, this is very powerful and heart-wrenching.. To lose a lover is bad enough.. but to lose something that you have believed in.. had faith in... you feel like there is no hope left... Cheri, I have been through this many times.. and know how this feels quite well. If you need a pair of listening ears, I'm here. Or just someone to talk to about your day, I'm here for that too. I like to ramble, and i'm not afraid to admit that I do, lol. Excellent piece of perfection. Your writing never fails to enchant and beguil. Thank you so much for sharing. All my love. Forever,

Your friend and fan,

Stephy.

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