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There is no reason to live
This is because
I am a mistake
I wasn't meant to be

I feel so torn
So guilty
So horrible
I wish I was never born

You yell at me
You tell me its all my fault
Driving me closer
Closer to the edge

I'm looking for someone
Anyone to show me
To say its all ok
But that will only be in my dreams

As the voices in my head scream.
I'm trying to find a reason to stay
But nothing is worth it
I should get that out of my head

And now I know that its my time to go
Because you've never wanted me
And you never will
So thanks for showing me the truth
That everythings my fault.
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My Fault

Contributed by Jen54 on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:52:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Why am I here
There is no reason to live
This is because
I am a mistake
I wasn't meant to be

I feel so torn
So guilty
So horrible
I wish I was never born

You yell at me
You tell me its all my fault
Driving me closer
Closer to the edge

I'm looking for someone
Anyone to show me
To say its all ok
But that will only be in my dreams

As the voices in my head scream.
I'm trying to find a reason to stay
But nothing is worth it
I should get that out of my head

And now I know that its my time to go
Because you've never wanted me
And you never will
So thanks for showing me the truth
That everythings my fault.

Copyright © Jen54 ... [ 2005-03-18 15:52:15]
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Re: My Fault (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:14:05 PM AEST
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your expression of emotions is wonderful throughout it flowed nice....

Im sorry that your feeling this way though.
Happenings within the family are hard to overcome but know that there are people who do care and as you go on in your life others will fill in missing parts that are lacking this is for real I promise you.Hang in there
Michelle

Re: My Fault (User Rating: 1 )
by sweet_lil_b2003 on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 08:54:39 PM AEST
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hey awsome write..I can relate because I feel the same way. Im sorry you feel this way I no how much it hurts. just remember you are loved~Crystal~

Re: My Fault (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 07:33:13 PM AEST
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An awesome write.

There's always someone in our lives that just seem to get off hacking away at our self esteem, to belittle us until there is nothing left. But I hope you know that this isn't a dream.... :) they are the ones that aren't worth it. They only blame others to make themselves feel better. Unfortunately there will always be people like this around and know that you are worth a lot to a lot of us and that "they" can be avoided. Be strong as their painful words can be ignored because you know they are wrong.

Re: My Fault (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 10:19:21 PM AEST
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girl it's not your fault stop feeling this way you need a friend i am here for you

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