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Array ( [sid] => 8788 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Stories of Refuge: Whisper [time] => 2002-12-18 03:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Hello... Are you there? I'm trapped... inside my head. Can you help me? I promise I'm okay. Are you okay? Will you help me? I'm afraid that I belong... I don't want to belong. I'm sad. I'm happy. No, I'm sad. Maybe you can help me?
What's your name? Do you have any friends? Enemies? No. You're alone too. I'm sorry. I shouldn't bother you with all my problems because you have your own. We all have problems, don't we? What's your problem?
I'm stuck in my head and I can't get out. The monsters scare me, make me weak. I wish you were here. Maybe you can help me. No maybes. We say maybe to often.
We have many possiblities in life. I want out. I want out of my head... maybe I'm whispering to myself.

I'm two people; that which I keep hidden and that which I show.
Kara [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 36 [informant] => MysticThornz [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Stories of Refuge: Whisper

Contributed by MysticThornz on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Hello... Are you there? I'm trapped... inside my head. Can you help me? I promise I'm okay. Are you okay? Will you help me? I'm afraid that I belong... I don't want to belong. I'm sad. I'm happy. No, I'm sad. Maybe you can help me?
What's your name? Do you have any friends? Enemies? No. You're alone too. I'm sorry. I shouldn't bother you with all my problems because you have your own. We all have problems, don't we? What's your problem?
I'm stuck in my head and I can't get out. The monsters scare me, make me weak. I wish you were here. Maybe you can help me. No maybes. We say maybe to often.
We have many possiblities in life. I want out. I want out of my head... maybe I'm whispering to myself.

I'm two people; that which I keep hidden and that which I show.
Kara

Copyright © MysticThornz ... [ 2002-12-18 03:00:00]
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Re: Stories of Refuge: Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 11:25:01 AM AEST
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It appears to me you've both been inside my head as well MysticThornz,
I really like this, it's how my head works also!
Excellent writing,

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Stories of Refuge: Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by MysticThornz on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:50:07 PM AEST
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Why thank you Dean, most possibly gong to have to read what you write to see if you've been inside my head as well.

Love YA
Pandora

Re: Stories of Refuge: Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:29:31 AM AEST
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nice change from the common poem form.

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