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Array ( [sid] => 8778 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => gifted [time] => 2002-12-17 23:40:00 [hometext] => this poem was inspired by a friend of mine and how he described his childhood to me. [bodytext] => this soul has turned bitter and black
feeding off the hate of others
past lifetimes- memories that wont come back
left all alone,
in this world of pain
blackened by a frozen moment in time
repeating only in his mind
no one else can see
all the anger and pain he feels
wanting to leave this places he wishes werent real
left all alone
in this moment of pain
hate finds a new way to breed everyday
spawning from every which way
all the demons tear at his mind
soon itll all be left behind
his body losing all vitality
vivid eyes closing to embrace a new reality

embrace me
one final time
erase me
it will still be fine.

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gifted

Contributed by fallensilence on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

this soul has turned bitter and black
feeding off the hate of others
past lifetimes- memories that wont come back
left all alone,
in this world of pain
blackened by a frozen moment in time
repeating only in his mind
no one else can see
all the anger and pain he feels
wanting to leave this places he wishes werent real
left all alone
in this moment of pain
hate finds a new way to breed everyday
spawning from every which way
all the demons tear at his mind
soon itll all be left behind
his body losing all vitality
vivid eyes closing to embrace a new reality

embrace me
one final time
erase me
it will still be fine.

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2002-12-17 23:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: gifted (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:32:29 PM AEST
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This is so sad....and your friend, if he felt like being erased would be fine then tha's not true....this made me cry....it's a beautiful write but it's so sad....thanks for sharing this one...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: gifted (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 05:11:27 PM AEST
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wow...that's so beautiful...you haven'r had the credit you deserve for this poem and nothing i will say will give you that...but wow...

Re: gifted (User Rating: 1 )
by Panther_1978 on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 09:31:23 PM AEST
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this is a very sad poem... but a great write
Keep them coming

Panther

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