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Array ( [sid] => 87628 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Waits For Him [time] => 2005-03-16 07:35:29 [hometext] => This is a poem about lost love or broken hearts...In this poem a girl allowed herself to be stepped on and it killed her inside now all she all she can do is stare..she locked herself in her mind (that is possible)...he pretty much broke her in every area [bodytext] => Long black hair
She's that broken girl over there
She let it hit her
It knocked her down
She let it kill her
It shut her down
She did it for love
She once felt
She did it for hope
That he took away
Sometimes...
She mumbles his name
Sometimes...
She calls herself insane
We tried to help her up..
She refused our hands
They said that his love made her..
But his hate destroyed her
But still...
She waits for him
Broken to pieces
She waits for him... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Broken_Inside [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Waits For Him

Contributed by Broken_Inside on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 07:35:29 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Long black hair
She's that broken girl over there
She let it hit her
It knocked her down
She let it kill her
It shut her down
She did it for love
She once felt
She did it for hope
That he took away
Sometimes...
She mumbles his name
Sometimes...
She calls herself insane
We tried to help her up..
She refused our hands
They said that his love made her..
But his hate destroyed her
But still...
She waits for him
Broken to pieces
She waits for him...

Copyright © Broken_Inside ... [ 2005-03-16 07:35:29]
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Re: Waits For Him (User Rating: 1 )
by unrestrained19 on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:21:02 PM AEST
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loved it!!!!

Re: Waits For Him (User Rating: 1 )
by sweet_lil_b2003 on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:27:44 PM AEST
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amazing poem..i loved it so much meaning ~~Crystal~~

Re: Waits For Him (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:31:07 PM AEST
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Sad but awesome writing.
huggs,
emy

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