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Array ( [sid] => 87441 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All That's Been Left [time] => 2005-03-14 16:24:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => One pearl earing.

A woven bag.

A few coins in her mothers coin purse.

A couple letters from her dad.

A half empty carton of milk.

A pencil half full of lead.

A diary that has hardly been written in.

One cat that needs to be fed.

One sandal lying in the kitchen.

Those three quarters the door has been opened.

A rusty truck in her front yard.

An old dress drying and blowing in the wind.

These are all that's left of Sereny.

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All That's Been Left

Contributed by ForeverAndADay on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:24:53 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

One pearl earing.

A woven bag.

A few coins in her mothers coin purse.

A couple letters from her dad.

A half empty carton of milk.

A pencil half full of lead.

A diary that has hardly been written in.

One cat that needs to be fed.

One sandal lying in the kitchen.

Those three quarters the door has been opened.

A rusty truck in her front yard.

An old dress drying and blowing in the wind.

These are all that's left of Sereny.

-DNB

Copyright © ForeverAndADay ... [ 2005-03-14 16:24:53]
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Re: All That's Been Left (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:46:45 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. Heart-wrenchingly sad and yet beautiful at the same time. I really like this one, its original, creavie, deep and meaningful. Very well written. Thanks for sharing.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: All That's Been Left (User Rating: 1 )
by BloodsINK on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:39:05 PM AEST
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well writen, hard to explain really how i felt while reading this but i could see images . . and felt involved in the emotion of it , thanx for sharing
xBLOODINKx

Re: All That's Been Left (User Rating: 1 )
by Banana_babe on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 07:06:12 PM AEST
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good write, i can picture all of these item of my head. i am sorry for your loss. keep on writing.

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