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Array ( [sid] => 87315 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To Jayme: [time] => 2005-03-12 23:57:46 [hometext] => I'm thinking of printing out a copy of this for him, but not to sure if I should... what do you think??? [bodytext] => You’ve stolen my innocence
And I don’t want it back
You’ve got my heart in your hands
And it’s no longer alone and black
I’ve lost all sense of control
But I’m not going to look for it
You’ve got my soul.
And you’ve got my love
You can hold me in your arms
You can kiss me where you will
And I won’t tell you not to
I am obedient to you
And I’d follow you to the end
To you I always be true
I just wrote this to say two things:
Thank You and I love you [comments] => 4 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Amaterian_Angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

To Jayme:

Contributed by Amaterian_Angel on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:57:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You’ve stolen my innocence
And I don’t want it back
You’ve got my heart in your hands
And it’s no longer alone and black
I’ve lost all sense of control
But I’m not going to look for it
You’ve got my soul.
And you’ve got my love
You can hold me in your arms
You can kiss me where you will
And I won’t tell you not to
I am obedient to you
And I’d follow you to the end
To you I always be true
I just wrote this to say two things:
Thank You and I love you

Copyright Â© Amaterian_Angel ... [ 2005-03-12 23:57:46]
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Re: To Jayme: (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 12:33:52 AM AEST
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Nice...I love this poem....But dont print it out and give it to him............It should be hand written....it'll be more special...=]

Clark

Re: To Jayme: (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 06:17:23 AM AEST
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Very nice poem. I think you should print a copy of this and give it to him. I'm sure he'll love this...well, who wouldn't?

Keep it up!

-Butch

Re: To Jayme: (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:15:58 AM AEST
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Such a wonderful poem, showing such adoration for that special person.

Thanks for posting this amazing poem, it reminds me of my first poem i did ages ago LOL.

Hugs,
Jane xxx

Re: To Jayme: (User Rating: 1 )
by sweet_lil_b2003 on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:48:42 PM AEST
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you should print this poem out and give it to him because its what you feel and you express it amazinily...~~Crystal~~

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