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Lost in the night, never to see the day
Never again to be discovered,
Never again to be recovered.

I can’t seem to keep a hold,
They drift away & leave me so cold,
Standing alone to suffer some more,
On my feelings everyone has closed the door.

I try so hard to grab dreams in my hand,
But by myself is where I stand,
Everyone else has dreams why can’t I?
I just feel like fading away to cry.

Why is it that happiness is all but a memory,
I feel like the whole world’s my sworn enemy,
My eyes have cried until they hurt,
I have crawled for so long in the dirt.

Please someone must have one spare dream,
One that will make my smile beam
One that will lift me right out of my pain,
One that will make me live again.
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Deams All Fade Away

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 02:41:25 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My dreams are all fading away,
Lost in the night, never to see the day
Never again to be discovered,
Never again to be recovered.

I can’t seem to keep a hold,
They drift away & leave me so cold,
Standing alone to suffer some more,
On my feelings everyone has closed the door.

I try so hard to grab dreams in my hand,
But by myself is where I stand,
Everyone else has dreams why can’t I?
I just feel like fading away to cry.

Why is it that happiness is all but a memory,
I feel like the whole world’s my sworn enemy,
My eyes have cried until they hurt,
I have crawled for so long in the dirt.

Please someone must have one spare dream,
One that will make my smile beam
One that will lift me right out of my pain,
One that will make me live again.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-03-09 14:41:25]
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Re: Deams All Fade Away (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 03:11:09 PM AEST
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Ohhh i liked that, very emotively done and the ryming was just outstanding.

A great write as always Krissie

Jane ^_^

Re: Deams All Fade Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 03:32:53 PM AEST
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A very good poem.

Re: Deams All Fade Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 03:43:05 PM AEST
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I always admire your gift for putting yourself right into your work. Your emotion is clear and well expressed

Re: Deams All Fade Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:05:35 AM AEST
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great work as always krissie, a 5 star poem if ever i saw one!

Johnny.

Re: Deams All Fade Away (User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 02:42:25 PM AEST
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that was great!,.......i never dream, but when i do they turn out to be coincidences in the future.... I WISH I COULD DREAM TOO!!!.... now i feel so sad and blue .... well, i really liked you poem no - i really like your poem..

Re: Deams All Fade Away (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 09:02:05 AM AEST
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I understand it all. Can relate so much to your words. You described your emotions so very well. Can relate to this so much.
Hopes dreams and aspirations in turmoil

Fabulous poem

Love Sweetangelukxxxx

Re: Deams All Fade Away (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 02:18:02 AM AEST
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well done

Re: Deams All Fade Away (User Rating: 1 )
by pander on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 12:46:03 PM AEST
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What can I say that hasn't been said Krissie?

Another excellent write from an excellend writer.

Luv,

Pander
xxxx

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