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Array ( [sid] => 86809 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever Lost [time] => 2005-03-08 00:34:45 [hometext] => inspired by everyone who has failed to guide me towards the light of god [bodytext] => I have seen through the lies that everyone is so blind and ignorant to see.
I no longer walk down the same path of my family.
A road of my own I have created,
that brings tears in my family and shames.
I am my own hero, I saved myself from a life long slavery.
I ask for no forgiveness to soothe my conscience.
Meaningless to me and my guilt free conscience.
For I will Sin again.
I do not want the company of others
I will remain solitaire, isolated where no one bothers.
I will hurt everyone who trys to help me,
they failed to guide me to the light of God,
my soul belongs to darkness,
I am forever lost. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 13 [informant] => axeman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Forever Lost

Contributed by axeman on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 12:34:45 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I have seen through the lies that everyone is so blind and ignorant to see.
I no longer walk down the same path of my family.
A road of my own I have created,
that brings tears in my family and shames.
I am my own hero, I saved myself from a life long slavery.
I ask for no forgiveness to soothe my conscience.
Meaningless to me and my guilt free conscience.
For I will Sin again.
I do not want the company of others
I will remain solitaire, isolated where no one bothers.
I will hurt everyone who trys to help me,
they failed to guide me to the light of God,
my soul belongs to darkness,
I am forever lost.

Copyright © axeman ... [ 2005-03-08 00:34:45]
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Re: Forever Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by enjoiskating6 on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 12:45:27 AM AEST
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very very good, i love it. dark like most of my poems lol and it really made an impression as i read it.

Re: Forever Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by sapphireshadow on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:26:23 AM AEST
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Awesome poem. Very deep. "I do not want the company of others
I will remain solitaire, isolated where no one bothers."
Sometimes I feel like that too.

Re: Forever Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 06:28:02 PM AEST
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That was very dark. "I will remain solitaire, isolated where no one bothers. I will hurt everyone who trys to help me" That's the crazy part, very scary...I like it! Good write!!

Re: Forever Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by MemeCaroline on Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 12:09:05 PM AEST
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I find the last line to be interesting.

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