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Array ( [sid] => 86650 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => THE MURDER WEAPON [time] => 2005-03-06 14:58:42 [hometext] => THIS IS A BLOODY-ASZ POEM...PARENTAL GUIDANCE!!! [bodytext] => I thot i told yall ya dont wanna see my anger
ill pull back the trigga an shells'll fly out the chamber
cuz ima head ringa, aint no stranga to danga
im a murderous gangsta wit a itchy trigga finga
not a lil church singa, i got tricks up my sleeve
call me a magician cuz ill have ya missin 4 weeks
an i only got one friend an thats a *****in tech 9
an i use him when a ***** tries to ***** wit mines
an if a ***** steps to me ima givem' the blues
nokk him rite out his shoes, nahh cuz ****** in
compton dont play no jokes, ones that black car
rolls up..im killin him an his folks,leavin them soaked
in they own blood,shoot up the club,up in the hood
smokin a dub,showin no luv,wit the A.K.-47
leve yo block smoke like Narman & Weston
cuz im a gangsta homie, recognize the fit
i empty a 150 cuz im strapped wit clips
bustin ****** *****,establish the crime scene
we the killaz in the middle of LA
home of gangsta rap an ****** die everyday....
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THE MURDER WEAPON

Contributed by compton-tre-block on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 02:58:42 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I thot i told yall ya dont wanna see my anger
ill pull back the trigga an shells'll fly out the chamber
cuz ima head ringa, aint no stranga to danga
im a murderous gangsta wit a itchy trigga finga
not a lil church singa, i got tricks up my sleeve
call me a magician cuz ill have ya missin 4 weeks
an i only got one friend an thats a *****in tech 9
an i use him when a ***** tries to ***** wit mines
an if a ***** steps to me ima givem' the blues
nokk him rite out his shoes, nahh cuz ****** in
compton dont play no jokes, ones that black car
rolls up..im killin him an his folks,leavin them soaked
in they own blood,shoot up the club,up in the hood
smokin a dub,showin no luv,wit the A.K.-47
leve yo block smoke like Narman & Weston
cuz im a gangsta homie, recognize the fit
i empty a 150 cuz im strapped wit clips
bustin ****** *****,establish the crime scene
we the killaz in the middle of LA
home of gangsta rap an ****** die everyday....

Copyright © compton-tre-block ... [ 2005-03-06 14:58:42]
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Re: THE MURDER WEAPON (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 05:52:34 PM AEST
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So when did you decide that this was a good write to post. If you are involved in such a horrific lifestyle, then you will get what you deserve. But if it is written out of anger of sorts, there are better ways to express it. Use the talents that you have to become more than a gangsta. It doesn't make one great. It just grows hate. Pity by some, but tomorrow you will just be a statistic and no one will care.

Re: THE MURDER WEAPON (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Saturday, 3rd November 2012 @ 12:12:33 PM AEST
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I think people need to be more objective.
Those who call themselves poets any way.
Example: Stephen King, any one really thinks
he does all the things he writes about,
or even experienced half of it? Maybe, maybe not.
The point is likely someone lives this life style, not to be approved or dis approved;
but to be objectively considered.
This life style is no different from the wars waged by governments
every day(the only difference is the tax payers pockects are tapped)
My point is the authur is just that, a storyteller.
Of course my friend rules can be a challenge,
but you're talented enough to respect them(i.e the language)

-UNORTHODOX

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