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[aid] => mick
[title] => LONELY
[time] => 2005-03-04 11:20:42
[hometext] => My husband was away for a few days and he said I never knew lonely till now. Inspired me to write this poem
[bodytext] => Photos silver frames hanging on the wall
I will always love you darling memory recall
Goodbye my love may you find your dream
Waterfall of tears flowing in a tidal stream
Beauty thrust from the image of his mind
Wanting to hate her they say love is blind
Gathering his thoughts stepped away
Almost changed his mind action replay
With a heavy heart he climbed the stairs
To an empty bed that once was theirs
Looking for contentment an empty space
Lost without consuming love to embrace
Outside sounds of laughter in the dark
Words haunting his mind a caustic remark
He never knew lonely could be so blue
Never knew lonely could tear you in two
[comments] => 14
[counter] => 278
[topic] => 22
[informant] => sweetangeluk
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[pollID] => 0
[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 0
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LostLove
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LONELY
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 11:20:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Photos silver frames hanging on the wall
I will always love you darling memory recall
Goodbye my love may you find your dream
Waterfall of tears flowing in a tidal stream
Beauty thrust from the image of his mind
Wanting to hate her they say love is blind
Gathering his thoughts stepped away
Almost changed his mind action replay
With a heavy heart he climbed the stairs
To an empty bed that once was theirs
Looking for contentment an empty space
Lost without consuming love to embrace
Outside sounds of laughter in the dark
Words haunting his mind a caustic remark
He never knew lonely could be so blue
Never knew lonely could tear you in two
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Re: LONELY
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by Red_October on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 12:06:12 PM AEST
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| so true, so lovely expressed. Tiffany J. |
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Re: LONELY
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:13:39 PM AEST
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An incredibly stunning write. Its beautiful and yet heart-wrenching at the same time, written to perfection, thanks for sharing.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: LONELY
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by pixie on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:15:39 PM AEST
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powerful and sad writing, deep emotion
pix xx |
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Re: LONELY
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:29:44 PM AEST
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oh such sadness this touches me as never before comng from one so devoted i'm sorry
4 your pain and hoping u r well . . .
(((((((((4 sweetangeluk))))))))) beautifull poem
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: LONELY
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 05:13:49 PM AEST
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Awww Angel..this is so touching...and so sweet. Good that he misses you..and so well written
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: LONELY
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 05:13:50 PM AEST
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Awww Angel..this is so touching...and so sweet. Good that he misses you..and so well written
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: LONELY
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 05:13:50 PM AEST
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Awww Angel..this is so touching...and so sweet. Good that he misses you..and so well written
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: LONELY
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by veenu on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 01:27:35 AM AEST
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thats tallented................what we can do,just the memories we can shake...........
whatever great poem
and is so true
when emotion is love evey one is poet...............................................
naveen |
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Re: LONELY
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:34:49 AM AEST
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Funny some of the things you miss when your loved one isn't there, even the silly things like when she forgets to put the milk back in the fridge.
When my wife gets home today I will remind her how much I love her.........your poem reminded me of that.
Steve |
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Re: LONELY
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 10:53:43 AM AEST
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yeah it's weird! I recently split with my partner and after about 5 weeks (took me a time!) i started feeling lonely. Thats the thing about familiarity, people become almost a habit! and when they're gone you get those cravings like trying to give up smoking again!
Johnny.
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Re: LONELY
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:53:20 PM AEST
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Just goes to prove the saying is true: you don't realize what you have til it is gone.
(I went to work in Washington state for a few months. I am glad to be back.) |
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Re: LONELY
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by SimplyMe on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:17:31 AM AEST
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Man your poems just reach out and grab me. You have wonderful talent that shines through. Your words are so inspiring. You take a simple thing in life and make it so much more. You have just earned yourself a spot with my favorites on this site. :-) God i wish i could write as good as a great many of you. Though that is what makes the best writers of today. Originality, and uniqueness. You my friend give a new meaning to both. Very well expressed. Well done.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: LONELY
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:22:31 AM AEST
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| Great poem. I can definately relate to this poem. |
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Re: LONELY
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 04:25:44 PM AEST
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Wonderful description of what happens when two-in-love are separated by location when it is unused to. I feel the same way when he has to go away on buisness (which isn't very often), Beautifully done.
Blessings, J. |
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