Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	12-June 08:07:24 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 86015 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Welcome Death [time] => 2005-02-28 18:45:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Pitch black entrance
To my mind of insanity
Alive yet dead
Im lost already
One more breath
And its all over
Watch that step
Yes, my child
Have caution yet
Live in fear
Of what will and might've been
Another mistake
And you shall surely fall
Don't waste your breath
On that one last scream
No one will hear you
No one will save you
Close your eyes, my dear
And welcome death [comments] => 6 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 59 [informant] => Daniels_Princess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Welcome Death

Contributed by Daniels_Princess on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 06:45:40 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Pitch black entrance
To my mind of insanity
Alive yet dead
Im lost already
One more breath
And its all over
Watch that step
Yes, my child
Have caution yet
Live in fear
Of what will and might've been
Another mistake
And you shall surely fall
Don't waste your breath
On that one last scream
No one will hear you
No one will save you
Close your eyes, my dear
And welcome death

Copyright © Daniels_Princess ... [ 2005-02-28 18:45:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Welcome Death (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 07:05:56 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

very depressing...but beautiful. loved it alot.

Re: Welcome Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:24:26 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

always seemed to me that death never needed to be welcomed, it was always the annoying person that would follow a person around. this was a great write by the way. one day i will learn to stop rambling.

Re: Welcome Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Naveen on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:01:44 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Thats abounds state of melancholy and complete anguish well entrapped through
words

nice one, really touches

Re: Welcome Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:52:56 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Thank you all for your replies, and sometimes Death doesnt need to be welcomed, and its more so pushed away..but when life is just..going nowhere and people start to give up..they welcome Death..I wrote this in the form of Stan actually trying to talk someone into suicide..so..hope you all like it. However, no, this isnt what Im going through..althought it once was. Again, thank you for your much appreciated comments.

Re: Welcome Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:46:56 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Nice write. But really depressing. Kind of makes someone want to kill themselves. Well really I am speaking of myself but I would hope no one else thought that like I did.

Scott

Re: Welcome Death (User Rating: 1 )
by CrippinBabi513 on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 03:11:26 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

well expressed...good write....

* Babi

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com