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Array ( [sid] => 85959 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't Know How Much More I Can Take [time] => 2005-02-28 03:06:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can't take this anymore
I just want to die
Why are you always on her side
It really hurts when you believe her over me

I wish that you could see what she does when you aren't around
The way she treats us all
She needs to grow up but this will never happen
It is too late for that

I told you how she threatens punishment upon her child
All you said was when I had children you wouldn't tell me how to punish them
But it's different when someone could get sick
Haven't you ever heard of the term : Child abuse

I called my mom even though she was far
She was so angry at her
She called you since you were at work all ticked off
Then you acted like it was my fault since I called her not you

I don't control what she says
Especially that she wants to beat her up
I started laughing because it's what she deserves
I wish you could see how much it hurts

You told me to tell you what went on and that no one would get upset
But she went into her bedroom and locked the door
So you picked the lock and argued
Such childish behavior why can't you see

I know you know she's crazy
Because she takes a lot of medication to control herself
But don't you see it isn't working
I don't know how much more I can take

I want you to realize that I am fragile and easily break
I've hurt myself before but you didn't know
It's because of what you've both done to me

I hate it when you're angry
So you bring my mother into the argument
Of how she isn't perfect and makes mistakes too
Don't you know that no one is perfect even her

I know she's jealous because I love my mom
She says I'm just protecting her
What am I protecting her from please inform me of this
Not my fault that no one likes her but doesn't want to lose him

Please open up your eyes
So you won't be fooled
Stop letting her mistreat us all
I love you but I don't know how much more I can take [comments] => 2 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 48 [informant] => UnlovedChild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Don't Know How Much More I Can Take

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 03:06:35 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I can't take this anymore
I just want to die
Why are you always on her side
It really hurts when you believe her over me

I wish that you could see what she does when you aren't around
The way she treats us all
She needs to grow up but this will never happen
It is too late for that

I told you how she threatens punishment upon her child
All you said was when I had children you wouldn't tell me how to punish them
But it's different when someone could get sick
Haven't you ever heard of the term : Child abuse

I called my mom even though she was far
She was so angry at her
She called you since you were at work all ticked off
Then you acted like it was my fault since I called her not you

I don't control what she says
Especially that she wants to beat her up
I started laughing because it's what she deserves
I wish you could see how much it hurts

You told me to tell you what went on and that no one would get upset
But she went into her bedroom and locked the door
So you picked the lock and argued
Such childish behavior why can't you see

I know you know she's crazy
Because she takes a lot of medication to control herself
But don't you see it isn't working
I don't know how much more I can take

I want you to realize that I am fragile and easily break
I've hurt myself before but you didn't know
It's because of what you've both done to me

I hate it when you're angry
So you bring my mother into the argument
Of how she isn't perfect and makes mistakes too
Don't you know that no one is perfect even her

I know she's jealous because I love my mom
She says I'm just protecting her
What am I protecting her from please inform me of this
Not my fault that no one likes her but doesn't want to lose him

Please open up your eyes
So you won't be fooled
Stop letting her mistreat us all
I love you but I don't know how much more I can take




Copyright © UnlovedChild ... [ 2005-02-28 03:06:35]
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Re: Don't Know How Much More I Can Take (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 03:24:47 AM AEST
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Amy this is so sad, beautifuly writen you have poured your emotions so well.

Hugs,
Janey xxx


Re: Don't Know How Much More I Can Take (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:27:49 AM AEST
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so sad ...




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