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and stretched relaxed amid those pieces ~
All the tortured insides and the pain relayed
in words he’s read on those same days
Leaked each time my poetry would bleed
I’d do anything ever to myself and more
Just to have him for myself, just to fulfill this need
Now I don’t know what to do when he makes me sad

He is everything to me
the unobtainable dream ~ when he sings right where my poetry still bleeds
The most empty feeling
He’s a fairy tale that I continue to believe in
And all I need to make it real is one more minute of waiting
while I choke on what is building up inside of me

His name is stuck in my throat
But he is more fake than he is real
I’d do anything ever to myself and more
Just to have him standing at my front door
He is everything to me,
so I don’t know what to do when he makes me sad
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When He Makes Me Sad

Contributed by Red_October on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 09:01:49 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

He’s seen lust in all of me,
and stretched relaxed amid those pieces ~
All the tortured insides and the pain relayed
in words he’s read on those same days
Leaked each time my poetry would bleed
I’d do anything ever to myself and more
Just to have him for myself, just to fulfill this need
Now I don’t know what to do when he makes me sad

He is everything to me
the unobtainable dream ~ when he sings right where my poetry still bleeds
The most empty feeling
He’s a fairy tale that I continue to believe in
And all I need to make it real is one more minute of waiting
while I choke on what is building up inside of me

His name is stuck in my throat
But he is more fake than he is real
I’d do anything ever to myself and more
Just to have him standing at my front door
He is everything to me,
so I don’t know what to do when he makes me sad

Copyright Â© Red_October ... [ 2005-02-24 21:01:49]
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Re: When He Makes Me Sad (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 09:11:25 PM AEST
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Hang in there sweet heart, have you ever thought maybe just maybe your to good for him. Keep that beautiful poetry coming OK?

Re: When He Makes Me Sad (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 09:56:39 PM AEST
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I can certainly relate to this one many times older.
Your inner beauty is remarkable in this write and I agree with wesley.
Keep writing.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: When He Makes Me Sad (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:18:57 PM AEST
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wow..this is so beautiful and i got really emotional when i read this..makes me cry...i feel the same way as you do about someone, i feel like you've written about me. when i think back to him, the only person i could ever love, like you all i feel is sadness. thats all i feel too. its been a while now but my emotions r still so real and all my poetry is pretty much about him.
i hope you can be strong and get through this...im still trying but u can do it
take care now

Re: When He Makes Me Sad (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:04:25 AM AEST
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awesome write, well done

Re: When He Makes Me Sad (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 05:36:08 AM AEST
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that was amazing, i am sure hundreds of people can relate to this, i know i can. you are so talented. i envy your skill and empathise with you over the subject matter.

it will pass, time and experience puts wedges between you and your feelings even if you want to stay feeling that way for ever.

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