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Array ( [sid] => 85551 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unknown [time] => 2005-02-24 08:13:00 [hometext] => I do not have a title for this yet. If you have a suggestion, please post one. Thank you.- [bodytext] => The roaring tide rushes through the lands,
Sweeping people like iron claws through the sands.
Crumbling stone- like boulders crashing down,
Destroying everything within the town.

Beware! The Gods of Stone and Thunder come,
Knowing only but destruction; forcing you to run.
One by one, The Gods of Stone and Thunder
shall take,
Survivors will fall and cry in their wake.

Allow the survivors to hold their ground,
For the World shall soon come 'round.
Come child and hold onto me,
You will heal from the hidden sea.

The World's unified prayers and love will heal
Those temples of darkness that you may feel.
Hold on tight, while a unified World is coming to
fight,
Soon the Gods of Stone and Thunder will fall from
sight.
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Contributed by scorpion on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 08:13:00 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

The roaring tide rushes through the lands,
Sweeping people like iron claws through the sands.
Crumbling stone- like boulders crashing down,
Destroying everything within the town.

Beware! The Gods of Stone and Thunder come,
Knowing only but destruction; forcing you to run.
One by one, The Gods of Stone and Thunder
shall take,
Survivors will fall and cry in their wake.

Allow the survivors to hold their ground,
For the World shall soon come 'round.
Come child and hold onto me,
You will heal from the hidden sea.

The World's unified prayers and love will heal
Those temples of darkness that you may feel.
Hold on tight, while a unified World is coming to
fight,
Soon the Gods of Stone and Thunder will fall from
sight.

Copyright © scorpion ... [ 2005-02-24 08:13:00]
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Re: Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 08:49:38 AM AEST
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An enormous write...so powerful...
I bet you can think of a title....Just as powerful as your poem...!
I can only come up with...err
Almighty Power Or Something to that effect ? Sorry I can't think of anything better!
Cheers!

Re: Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by Arsenic on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:34:49 PM AEST
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Good write. I can see your trouble with a title. Perhapse: In the Presence of Gods

Cheers,
ARSENIC

Re: Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:30:08 AM AEST
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I am not sure what to say about the title. I liked how you put the child in your poem. That creates more feeling in the poem. Good write...
Jodi

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