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Array ( [sid] => 85547 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Secret Love [time] => 2005-02-24 02:29:01 [hometext] => A Long Measure of Seperation (Written short of breath) [bodytext] => To be without you, is to be overtaken by water.
The current so overwhelming and strong,
But still, I wish, I hope, I fight to go on,
The breath I take is when I see you,
Even tho it doesn't last long.
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A Secret Love

Contributed by beniam on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:29:01 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

To be without you, is to be overtaken by water.
The current so overwhelming and strong,
But still, I wish, I hope, I fight to go on,
The breath I take is when I see you,
Even tho it doesn't last long.

Copyright © beniam ... [ 2005-02-24 02:29:01]
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Re: A Secret Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:38:44 AM AEST
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Yes, that is EXACTLY what it feels like.
Good stuff. I love it when a poet says so much in so few words.
Stitch

Re: A Secret Love (User Rating: 1 )
by jace on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:34:00 AM AEST
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Come on , cheesy,
this is true expresion, and beniam here was kind
enough to share it with us, how crude of you to say, that,
I shall be reviwing your wouk soon!!!

Great work Beniam, truly expresive, a little short,
I wanted more,

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