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Up on the tightrope - that's me - up there!
Balancing shakily, certain to fall
I wish that I wasn't up here at all.

Perched so precarious, dangling yet,
Nothing below me, no - no safety net,
One side is darkness, the other is light
I'm walking the wire, and nothing feels right.

My balance is failing, I know that I'll lose,
I must decide on a side - I must choose,
One side is death and the other is life
I've made no decision - I'm walking the knife.

What an act! I'm a star! People watching me shake,
As I head for the end with each step that I take,
Shall I die? Shall I live? And does anyone care?
The tightrope goes on and I hang in the air.

Copyright Graeme King kingpoetry.com [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 48 [informant] => wewak11 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Tightrope

Contributed by wewak11 on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 04:45:36 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Look at me! Look at me! Here in the air!
Up on the tightrope - that's me - up there!
Balancing shakily, certain to fall
I wish that I wasn't up here at all.

Perched so precarious, dangling yet,
Nothing below me, no - no safety net,
One side is darkness, the other is light
I'm walking the wire, and nothing feels right.

My balance is failing, I know that I'll lose,
I must decide on a side - I must choose,
One side is death and the other is life
I've made no decision - I'm walking the knife.

What an act! I'm a star! People watching me shake,
As I head for the end with each step that I take,
Shall I die? Shall I live? And does anyone care?
The tightrope goes on and I hang in the air.

Copyright Graeme King kingpoetry.com

Copyright © wewak11 ... [ 2005-02-22 04:45:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Tightrope (User Rating: 1 )
by zaknafein8891 on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:16:08 AM AEST
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I really like this one. it has an interesting effect the way it starts off in a happy tone then grows rapidly bitter. great writing.

Re: Tightrope (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:48:25 PM AEST
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Excllent write. It kept me intriguied until the end. Nice work.

Re: Tightrope (User Rating: 1 )
by chazthepoet on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 05:18:46 AM AEST
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brill
great tension build up

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