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Array ( [sid] => 85115 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sunset at Noon [time] => 2005-02-20 22:39:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I always thought that when it comes
I'd be ready for the end
By that time I'd be resigned and tame
Death would appear a welcome friend

But what if I still want to live
Still want to learn and grow
What if I still have gifts to give
And I'm not yet ready to go

What if I am too young still
Not old enough to die
What if I want to wait until
I've experienced life to say goodbye

You were way too young
You were taken way too soon
Your time had just begun
The sun of your life set at noon

Whereever you have gone
Nearby or faraway
Please remember that with you
A piece of me died that day [comments] => 2 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 65 [informant] => ninnyfarfar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Sunset at Noon

Contributed by ninnyfarfar on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:39:58 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I always thought that when it comes
I'd be ready for the end
By that time I'd be resigned and tame
Death would appear a welcome friend

But what if I still want to live
Still want to learn and grow
What if I still have gifts to give
And I'm not yet ready to go

What if I am too young still
Not old enough to die
What if I want to wait until
I've experienced life to say goodbye

You were way too young
You were taken way too soon
Your time had just begun
The sun of your life set at noon

Whereever you have gone
Nearby or faraway
Please remember that with you
A piece of me died that day

Copyright © ninnyfarfar ... [ 2005-02-20 22:39:58]
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Re: Sunset at Noon (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:23:37 PM AEST
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This is so sad. I am very sorry for your loss. *S* Cynthia

Re: Sunset at Noon (User Rating: 1 )
by bethie on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 06:57:06 PM AEST
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This is a heartfelt plea for another chance. I thought it made that point very well. Develop your writing.

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