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Array ( [sid] => 85081 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Battle Of The Minds [time] => 2005-02-20 17:45:29 [hometext] => ~When part of your mind argues with the other~ [bodytext] => Faces of children are everywhere
but not yours
Their voices are everywhere
but not yours
Why do I even care?

Their presence tortures me
I can't let go of you
The cool breeze passes
and I miss your warmth

I hate your cold touch
and your stone cold heart
I hate the way you treat me
I want to turn back time so much

These fibers are breaking apart
Releasing the truth
Your face I cannot avoid
There's a knife that I want to
stab into your heart

But I can't
There's too much that
I already regret

I followed you and regretted it
I walked away from you and regretted it

You treat everyone like a scab,
you pick and won't leave it alone.
Then it hurts so bad, it bleeds
it heals, but you make it worse

There's so much that I could
blackmail you on
but I don't
it'll hurt others

I'll cure these feelings and
show you that
I don't need you

You're not gonna use me anymore
If you need the action,
use that ***** of yours

The side that cares for you
is vanishing
I don't need to explain why I
did the things I did

Thank you for teaching me not
to be so naive
and knowing that I don't
need a guy to be whole

You helped me find myself
Tonight I erase the memories
of you
And never again will I look back what What's His Face
did to me
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 48 [informant] => vanilla_flame [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Battle Of The Minds

Contributed by vanilla_flame on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 05:45:29 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Faces of children are everywhere
but not yours
Their voices are everywhere
but not yours
Why do I even care?

Their presence tortures me
I can't let go of you
The cool breeze passes
and I miss your warmth

I hate your cold touch
and your stone cold heart
I hate the way you treat me
I want to turn back time so much

These fibers are breaking apart
Releasing the truth
Your face I cannot avoid
There's a knife that I want to
stab into your heart

But I can't
There's too much that
I already regret

I followed you and regretted it
I walked away from you and regretted it

You treat everyone like a scab,
you pick and won't leave it alone.
Then it hurts so bad, it bleeds
it heals, but you make it worse

There's so much that I could
blackmail you on
but I don't
it'll hurt others

I'll cure these feelings and
show you that
I don't need you

You're not gonna use me anymore
If you need the action,
use that ***** of yours

The side that cares for you
is vanishing
I don't need to explain why I
did the things I did

Thank you for teaching me not
to be so naive
and knowing that I don't
need a guy to be whole

You helped me find myself
Tonight I erase the memories
of you
And never again will I look back what What's His Face
did to me




Copyright © vanilla_flame ... [ 2005-02-20 17:45:29]
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Re: Battle Of The Minds (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:25:37 PM AEST
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i like this one
keep it up

catz77




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