Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	03-June 09:18:50 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 85068 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever More [time] => 2005-02-20 15:44:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Piercing my heart
Truth be told
I had already thought it fell apart

Then you came along
Melting the cold
You proved me wrong

I thought I had given in
Thought I had lost hold
But then I met you, my sweetest sin

I am happy, when you are around
Unlike all the rest, you did'nt fold
It was you, I eventually found

All the torment and the pain, washed away
Creating a feeling that can't be sold
My hate and anger was wiped off the page

Like white out, it was all erased
clearing the paper, a story untold
Now that is'nt the case

You are mine, and I am your's
A love I want to grow...as we grow old
But if we don't work..and we grow bored
At least promise me
We'll be friends
Forever
...
Forever More [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 16 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Forever More

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 03:44:38 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Piercing my heart
Truth be told
I had already thought it fell apart

Then you came along
Melting the cold
You proved me wrong

I thought I had given in
Thought I had lost hold
But then I met you, my sweetest sin

I am happy, when you are around
Unlike all the rest, you did'nt fold
It was you, I eventually found

All the torment and the pain, washed away
Creating a feeling that can't be sold
My hate and anger was wiped off the page

Like white out, it was all erased
clearing the paper, a story untold
Now that is'nt the case

You are mine, and I am your's
A love I want to grow...as we grow old
But if we don't work..and we grow bored
At least promise me
We'll be friends
Forever
...
Forever More

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-20 15:44:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Forever More (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 09:46:59 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

so i guess you wont be forever alone, eh? this was a good poem clark. just like you, i dont like happy/ nice poems, but this was fine. i just need to go find something horrible to read now to make my brain function properly...

Re: Forever More (User Rating: 1 )
by GrantedLovable on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:32:41 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Short and sweet.

Re: Forever More (User Rating: 1 )
by heartbroken4ever on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 06:14:10 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I promise babe

Love you
Amber

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com