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Array ( [sid] => 84502 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Going to make you proud, Mom [time] => 2005-02-15 07:35:30 [hometext] => Not really a great poem, I realized I can make my dreams come true the other day and got overexcited thinking I could make my mom proud for the first time [bodytext] => I知 going to make you proud Mom,
I am.
I知 going to make up for my mistakes Mom,
You値l see.
I知 going to be the best I can Mom,
Just watch.
I知 going to raise my grades Mom,
You値l see.
I知 going to get a good job Mom,
Just watch.
I知 going to wait until marriage Mom,
You値l see.
I知 going to raise my kids well Mom,
Just watch.
I知 going to show you I love you Mom,
I will.
I知 going to show you I知 sorry Mom,
You値l see.
I知 going to make you proud Mom,
Just watch.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 55 [informant] => xXcrossedXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
I'm Going to make you proud, Mom

Contributed by xXcrossedXx on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:35:30 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



I知 going to make you proud Mom,
I am.
I知 going to make up for my mistakes Mom,
You値l see.
I知 going to be the best I can Mom,
Just watch.
I知 going to raise my grades Mom,
You値l see.
I知 going to get a good job Mom,
Just watch.
I知 going to wait until marriage Mom,
You値l see.
I知 going to raise my kids well Mom,
Just watch.
I知 going to show you I love you Mom,
I will.
I知 going to show you I知 sorry Mom,
You値l see.
I知 going to make you proud Mom,
Just watch.




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Re: I'm Going to make you proud, Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:53:47 AM AEST
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This is a GREAT poem! It has everything---it comes from deep inside and it flows with energy and excitement. I hope you do make her proud. It would be a great feeling, woudn't it?
Stitch


Re: I'm Going to make you proud, Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:08:23 PM AEST
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Wow. This is an excellent poem. And it's kind of how I feel. I want to make my Mom proud to. Haha. I don't know if I could. But anyways excellent poem!

Scott


Re: I'm Going to make you proud, Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:09:02 PM AEST
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Wonderful write! You'll make her proud by doing something great for yourself that makes YOU proud. :-)
Nice work.




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