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Array ( [sid] => 84275 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blissful Completion [time] => 2005-02-13 18:36:40 [hometext] => ~Just something that happened today for a few moments~ [bodytext] => My lips locked with yours; a perfect fit
Our bodies entwined; enigmatically almost
Once more we embrace; attempt to lock into place
Cause that's all a kiss is; striving to become one
And that's what we've done with our physical love
Just embellishing upon the love of our lives, the love of our souls

Then your chin takes it's rest on the nape of my neck
Your heavy breath whispers wordlessly to my ear
It’s heat radiating the feelings indescribably incredible
I align my lips with yours again; a jigsaw complete
I pull away; you brush the hair from my eyes
Your eyes are closed to cherish this moment
Mine open to gather it all in
Your eyes just breathe and steady there
Mine full to the brim with the love
For the brisk moment our eyes are both open
There’s a connection all the way to forever

I see me in your eyes; I see you in your eyes
I see the calm blue-green of our future
I see the parents that we’ll be someday; the love of our family
I see you; the man I’ve fallen in love with
The man who completes me

And so I smile and my eyes fill with tears
As our lips, safe and sound, find their place
Sealing the completion
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Blissful Completion

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 06:36:40 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



My lips locked with yours; a perfect fit
Our bodies entwined; enigmatically almost
Once more we embrace; attempt to lock into place
Cause that's all a kiss is; striving to become one
And that's what we've done with our physical love
Just embellishing upon the love of our lives, the love of our souls

Then your chin takes it's rest on the nape of my neck
Your heavy breath whispers wordlessly to my ear
It’s heat radiating the feelings indescribably incredible
I align my lips with yours again; a jigsaw complete
I pull away; you brush the hair from my eyes
Your eyes are closed to cherish this moment
Mine open to gather it all in
Your eyes just breathe and steady there
Mine full to the brim with the love
For the brisk moment our eyes are both open
There’s a connection all the way to forever

I see me in your eyes; I see you in your eyes
I see the calm blue-green of our future
I see the parents that we’ll be someday; the love of our family
I see you; the man I’ve fallen in love with
The man who completes me

And so I smile and my eyes fill with tears
As our lips, safe and sound, find their place
Sealing the completion




Copyright © liquidsunshine ... [ 2005-02-13 18:36:40]
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Re: Blissful Completion (User Rating: 1 )
by lifefliesby on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 06:59:45 PM AEST
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I love you babe.
When I'm with you, when we're intimate, it's undescribable.
I love your body.
I really do.
I love your mind.

I love you Chelsea.

I love you,

Jared Johnson


Re: Blissful Completion (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 08:43:48 PM AEST
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a sweet poem well done . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: Blissful Completion (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:42:25 AM AEST
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Oh, Chelsea...kisses hold such amazing power. You miraculously came closer than most to giving them justice.
~Carrie~




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