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Array ( [sid] => 84161 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever Lost [time] => 2005-02-12 18:50:46 [hometext] => Tell me what you think! [bodytext] => Forever Lost

Life and Light fall through my fingers
Turning to Death at my feet
Blending with the red tears
Of my broken heart and soul, forever lost

Nothing is left but the moonless nights
Forming creatures of Death before my eyes
In the shapes of my worst nightmare
Till I scream for Death itself to take me

I cry out for the Light to save me
But the night laughs at my cries
And He knows no mercy or pity
Death will bury me forever in its blackness

There is nothing left that can save me
No Light, no Life, no Love
Yet there was never Love for me
Only the Darkness that fills my heart

Hope escapes me leaving only pain
A pain that numbs my body of everything
Leaving the empty shell that is now my existence
Left with only the memory of a forever lost
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Forever Lost

Contributed by TruBlueLove on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 06:50:46 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Forever Lost

Life and Light fall through my fingers
Turning to Death at my feet
Blending with the red tears
Of my broken heart and soul, forever lost

Nothing is left but the moonless nights
Forming creatures of Death before my eyes
In the shapes of my worst nightmare
Till I scream for Death itself to take me

I cry out for the Light to save me
But the night laughs at my cries
And He knows no mercy or pity
Death will bury me forever in its blackness

There is nothing left that can save me
No Light, no Life, no Love
Yet there was never Love for me
Only the Darkness that fills my heart

Hope escapes me leaving only pain
A pain that numbs my body of everything
Leaving the empty shell that is now my existence
Left with only the memory of a forever lost




Copyright © TruBlueLove ... [ 2005-02-12 18:50:46]
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Re: Forever Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:14:02 PM AEST
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Wow...very deep and dark. The journey this poem takes is very powerful. Good work!

-Laurel


Re: Forever Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:30:50 PM AEST
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i'll have to agree with positivelypurple on this deep and dark write. I love it, awesome job

Brandy


Re: Forever Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by sojourner on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:36:12 AM AEST
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very good poem,some that read your poem can relate to the words you have written,for they have lived your words in their hearts and minds, the pain ebbs in time but the memories last forever.
sojourner,


Re: Forever Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by sojourner on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:36:12 AM AEST
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very good poem,some that read your poem can relate to the words you have written,for they have lived your words in their hearts and minds, the pain ebbs in time but the memories last forever.
sojourner,


Re: Forever Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by sojourner on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:36:18 AM AEST
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very good poem,some that read your poem can relate to the words you have written,for they have lived your words in their hearts and minds, the pain ebbs in time but the memories last forever.
sojourner,




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