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I hate feeling empty without him
I hate how everyone else has a dad and I don't
I hate wanting to die so I could be with him
I hate not knowing how he died and how it all happend
I hate how everyone says bad things about him
I hate how I failed him
Because I failed last year
I hate how I'm no one's little girl anymore

I hate how I can't remember his voice, smile and sence of humor
I hate how all the memories are fading
I hate how I have to live without him
I hate how he won't be there

I hate how he left me with so many un-answered questions
I hate how every year on 7th October I have to remember
That it's been +365 days more without him [comments] => 7 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Gigi_15 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Miss you R.I.P.

Contributed by Gigi_15 on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 11:50:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I hate that daddy died
I hate feeling empty without him
I hate how everyone else has a dad and I don't
I hate wanting to die so I could be with him
I hate not knowing how he died and how it all happend
I hate how everyone says bad things about him
I hate how I failed him
Because I failed last year
I hate how I'm no one's little girl anymore

I hate how I can't remember his voice, smile and sence of humor
I hate how all the memories are fading
I hate how I have to live without him
I hate how he won't be there

I hate how he left me with so many un-answered questions
I hate how every year on 7th October I have to remember
That it's been +365 days more without him

Copyright © Gigi_15 ... [ 2005-02-11 23:50:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Miss you R.I.P. (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 12:40:36 AM AEST
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Gigi, I'm so sorry for your loss
Thankyou for sharing this poem
It may acutually help some else
Many of us take a Dad for granted
I know i can't say anyting to make the pain go away- but please know that you have made an impact on me with this poem.

Please take care

eve

Re: Miss you R.I.P. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:11:21 AM AEST
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I'm sorry for your loss...When I was little, my dad almost died and I can imagine the pain you're going through. My prayers are with you.

Re: Miss you R.I.P. (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:10:05 AM AEST
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Gigi, I'm so sorry for the loss of ur father.
Many of us do take our dads for granted
My prayers go out to u and ur family

Re: Miss you R.I.P. (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:21:42 AM AEST
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im so sorry for your loss, you have opened my eyes up to how special fathers really are, my heart goes out to you.

Re: Miss you R.I.P. (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:48:59 AM AEST
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So much sorrow, and heartfelt emotions, beautifully written poem.

Re: Miss you R.I.P. (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:59:48 PM AEST
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I am still sorry for your loss. I don't have a Dad either though, so not everyone has a Dad.

Scott

Re: Miss you R.I.P. (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:49:58 PM AEST
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I do think this should have been seperate. Well done. Again, I am sorry. Thank you for opening so many eyes, I just wish you didn't have to feel the pain.
Please do take care.
David

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