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Array ( [sid] => 83609 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Always [time] => 2005-02-09 01:50:42 [hometext] => please comment if you like this poem [bodytext] => You said youd always love me
You said youd always care
I thought you were the one for me
And i knew your love was rare

We used to meet with a hug
We said goodbye with a kiss
But right now that doesnt matter to me
Cause its you and your love that i miss

Now you say its over
Without one last goodbye
Now you, the one i thought was the "love of my life" . . .
Is the reason that i cry

So, now i want you to know what you do
My feelings wil remain the same
And i will *still*always*love*you* [comments] => 6 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 2 [informant] => _smelly_oranges_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Always

Contributed by _smelly_oranges_ on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 01:50:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You said youd always love me
You said youd always care
I thought you were the one for me
And i knew your love was rare

We used to meet with a hug
We said goodbye with a kiss
But right now that doesnt matter to me
Cause its you and your love that i miss

Now you say its over
Without one last goodbye
Now you, the one i thought was the "love of my life" . . .
Is the reason that i cry

So, now i want you to know what you do
My feelings wil remain the same
And i will *still*always*love*you*

Copyright © _smelly_oranges_ ... [ 2005-02-09 01:50:42]
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Re: Always (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 01:52:07 AM AEST
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:-) Sweet write.

Re: Always (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 02:02:35 AM AEST
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adorable

If I may ask.... where did you come up with smelly oranges?? that really caught my attention

Michelle

Re: Always (User Rating: 1 )
by aprilrose on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 02:41:18 AM AEST
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it is a great poem full of feelings that are real with every heart break...keep wrighting

kelly

Re: Always (User Rating: 1 )
by Arsenic on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 05:48:05 AM AEST
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Very good. Suggest changing Is to Are in the 12th line, just for readability... and I had a tough time with the 13th (So, now I want...). Can't place my finger on it, but I had to read that line twice, messing up the flow. However, I'm slower then the average amature poet :-)

Look forward to reding more of your work. So, where does Smelly Ornges come from?

Warm regards,
ARSENIC

Re: Always (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:21:26 AM AEST
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awww that was very sweet and loving, a joy to read,
pix xx

Re: Always (User Rating: 1 )
by desireemiote on Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 10:06:02 AM AEST
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now I'm curious too... where did the smelly oranges thing come from?

I did like the flow of the poem... and the is to are thing.. I somehow managed to read it as are automatically so when I saw the comment about that I had to scroll back up to the poem to know what they meant.. oops.. I pre corrected it in my head..
Megan(and her bun in the oven)

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