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Array ( [sid] => 83354 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Internet Love [time] => 2005-02-07 11:16:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => when you were not online

it wasn't so fine

I was longing you so much

that we'd catch the sun shine

the dream i wrote you did you reveal

I packed that latter with real hot kiss seal

I wrote you that I've been missing you

ti's true darling I am not lying to you

our unborn unseen were asking me

when will our mother visit us to see

I was tongue tight in front of them

I couldn't do any thing but a damn'

how's been everything out there? I asked

come meet me remove that hidden mask

I accept I drew your face in dream

your body with chocolate N' your skin with cream

I tasted your lips with a gentle style

and there was on your face a sweet smile

our dremland is empty with you

come home, make our dream come true

I am ass alone as you without me

set the date and have a cup of tea

meet somewhere we can spend some time

whether you'd order tea or lime

I ain't that good as I wanted to be

but I know something I know I'd be

I'd be the best father of our yet un seen ones

we'll have more masti and more fun

I'd be the best friend for ever and ever

that you'd find in world no or never

and in the end,

I'd be the best husband and a love

to tell you how much I love you, this can't cover

the page can tell you the words only

N' without you my darlin' I'm alone and lonely.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 20 [informant] => opusmind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InternetLove )
Internet Love

Contributed by opusmind on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:16:26 AM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove



when you were not online

it wasn't so fine

I was longing you so much

that we'd catch the sun shine

the dream i wrote you did you reveal

I packed that latter with real hot kiss seal

I wrote you that I've been missing you

ti's true darling I am not lying to you

our unborn unseen were asking me

when will our mother visit us to see

I was tongue tight in front of them

I couldn't do any thing but a damn'

how's been everything out there? I asked

come meet me remove that hidden mask

I accept I drew your face in dream

your body with chocolate N' your skin with cream

I tasted your lips with a gentle style

and there was on your face a sweet smile

our dremland is empty with you

come home, make our dream come true

I am ass alone as you without me

set the date and have a cup of tea

meet somewhere we can spend some time

whether you'd order tea or lime

I ain't that good as I wanted to be

but I know something I know I'd be

I'd be the best father of our yet un seen ones

we'll have more masti and more fun

I'd be the best friend for ever and ever

that you'd find in world no or never

and in the end,

I'd be the best husband and a love

to tell you how much I love you, this can't cover

the page can tell you the words only

N' without you my darlin' I'm alone and lonely.





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Re: Internet Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:53:53 PM AEST
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Quite a few misspellings, but this poem has really good bones! Suggest you remove the spaces between the lines for easier reading as well. As to the poem itself, it strikes me as heartfelt and very desiring. Lovely write. Cheers!


Re: Internet Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 04:38:39 PM AEST
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this is beautiful... thanks for sharing.


Re: Internet Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Moe on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 02:32:06 PM AEST
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nice, happens all the time.




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