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Array ( [sid] => 83319 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i waited . . . [time] => 2005-02-07 01:47:58 [hometext] => please comment this poem i put a lot into it - thank you [bodytext] => i waited and you didnt come
i stood there watching for your car
my bags were packed and
your face wasnt there
i coudnt stand it i was only 7
you couldve come but mother lied
she said you were alive but you died
she thought it was best if i didnt know
but it hurt and i didnt let it show
i waited and you didnt come
for years would pass
as my tears fell fast
6 years to be exact
when she finally told me fiction from fact
i cried every night because

i waited and you didnt come

(by the way this hassnt happened to me but its my fear) [comments] => 4 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 32 [informant] => catz77 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

i waited . . .

Contributed by catz77 on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:47:58 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

i waited and you didnt come
i stood there watching for your car
my bags were packed and
your face wasnt there
i coudnt stand it i was only 7
you couldve come but mother lied
she said you were alive but you died
she thought it was best if i didnt know
but it hurt and i didnt let it show
i waited and you didnt come
for years would pass
as my tears fell fast
6 years to be exact
when she finally told me fiction from fact
i cried every night because

i waited and you didnt come

(by the way this hassnt happened to me but its my fear)

Copyright © catz77 ... [ 2005-02-07 01:47:58]
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Re: i waited . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:58:39 AM AEST
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This is very very Deep, and alot of emotions..all and all Great Write ~

Re: i waited . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Atari on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 02:04:17 AM AEST
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WOW! I got the chills when I read that... My mom was kind of like that but she didn't die! She just never showed up...nor did she ever care! I nearly cried! Thanks for that! ~Wonderful write!
You have a knack!
-Ariane

Re: i waited . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:40:31 AM AEST
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good write but dont waste time waitin

Re: i waited . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by vanilla_flame on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 05:57:10 PM AEST
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Very good write, worded very well
It's I can only write poems from my expierence, well I tried it once, kinda turned out dark and creepy, well enough with my blabbering

vanilla

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