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Array ( [sid] => 82636 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => sometimes i wish i couldnt feel... [time] => 2005-02-02 13:40:18 [hometext] => i wrote this after feeling bullied :( [bodytext] => sometimes i wish i couldnt feel,
then the fear and loneliness would be gone,
i could walk alone without paranoia in my head,
maybe i could move on,

sometimes i wish i couldnt feel,
i wish i didnt feel desire,
then i could relax and be myself,
pour freezing water over my fire,
i wish i could just let the eagle fly,
release my mind as it reaches terminal high,
then watch as its wings glide so gracefully,
peacefully soothing the clouds of the sky,
and just feel the magic of the moment,
without any other thoughts of worry,
no thoughts of hate and destress, just this world and me,

sometimes i wish i couldnt hate,
and i could let go of the pain in my heart,
but my mind needs to protect itself,
without hate i would surely be pulled apart,
if my anger subsided for one moment,
i would be walked on like a rug,
the mud can be scraped off,
but still it leaves a stain like blood,

imagine if the stain could disapear,
and my confidence came back to my form,
i would feel safe in a sence of love and peace,
like a whole new me had been born,

i wish i could be in control,
i could send this anxiety away,
i could tame all my stress into a little box,
then live life my way... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 48 [informant] => in2thetwilightzone2 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

sometimes i wish i couldnt feel...

Contributed by in2thetwilightzone2 on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:40:18 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

sometimes i wish i couldnt feel,
then the fear and loneliness would be gone,
i could walk alone without paranoia in my head,
maybe i could move on,

sometimes i wish i couldnt feel,
i wish i didnt feel desire,
then i could relax and be myself,
pour freezing water over my fire,
i wish i could just let the eagle fly,
release my mind as it reaches terminal high,
then watch as its wings glide so gracefully,
peacefully soothing the clouds of the sky,
and just feel the magic of the moment,
without any other thoughts of worry,
no thoughts of hate and destress, just this world and me,

sometimes i wish i couldnt hate,
and i could let go of the pain in my heart,
but my mind needs to protect itself,
without hate i would surely be pulled apart,
if my anger subsided for one moment,
i would be walked on like a rug,
the mud can be scraped off,
but still it leaves a stain like blood,

imagine if the stain could disapear,
and my confidence came back to my form,
i would feel safe in a sence of love and peace,
like a whole new me had been born,

i wish i could be in control,
i could send this anxiety away,
i could tame all my stress into a little box,
then live life my way...

Copyright © in2thetwilightzone2 ... [ 2005-02-02 13:40:18]
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Re: sometimes i wish i couldnt feel... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:48:19 PM AEST
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I sense a deep strength in you and its there just below the surface. You can overcome those who bulley you and your confidence is there you just dont feel it yet. I understand this perfectly. A bully tends to pick on those they are jealous of be yourself and shine
Michelle

( a little story) I had a guy lastnight tell me he was going to pound me through a door)
did it scare me no did I cry no I told him what I would do to him if he even tried it. In life there is always going to be a bully somewhere......... Im a grown woman you have grit use it to your advantage

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