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No reason to go on
Any longer

Your my fuel
For my Hatred

My life is void
No point in being toyed with
Any longer

Your my tool
For my Hatred

And now I'll take it

Pool of blood
Pain of hate
Insain
And lasting
To hell with
Destiny
****
Fate...

FAKE
I try to wake up
But I'm dead...
It's too late

You took my life
While Blinded by
Your Beauty
I hate you

That creates hatred
For your beauty
But I loved you

Guess I was hated
Guess I was'nt enough
Guess I was fated
To die by your beauty
Painted in red blood
I guess this is what you love
Never my disire
But my Death
Stained as you turned
And left
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Beauty

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:10:40 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My soul is gone
No reason to go on
Any longer

Your my fuel
For my Hatred

My life is void
No point in being toyed with
Any longer

Your my tool
For my Hatred

And now I'll take it

Pool of blood
Pain of hate
Insain
And lasting
To hell with
Destiny
****
Fate...

FAKE
I try to wake up
But I'm dead...
It's too late

You took my life
While Blinded by
Your Beauty
I hate you

That creates hatred
For your beauty
But I loved you

Guess I was hated
Guess I was'nt enough
Guess I was fated
To die by your beauty
Painted in red blood
I guess this is what you love
Never my disire
But my Death
Stained as you turned
And left

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-02 00:10:40]
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Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:26:43 AM AEST
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There's so much intense emotion in this write. It's very powerful. Excellent work.

Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:07:45 AM AEST
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very intense and deep.

Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:53:38 AM AEST
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Sad but written with beauty from the soul.
It's a masterpeice 'cause most folks can relate.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:56:46 AM AEST
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you wrote with such tender emotion on a very sad subject and made it all come to life. Keep up the good work
Michelle

Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:39:31 AM AEST
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What a dark sad write, very nicely done.
Great write.

Jane x

Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:05:46 PM AEST
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very different than all of your other poems. hatred needs no fuel, it needs the object to hate.

Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 01:37:19 AM AEST
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wow, could feel the emotion steaming off of that one! great job!

Curtis

Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by heartbroken4ever on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:27:34 PM AEST
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I didn't know you could write something that deep almost makes me want to cry

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