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Array ( [sid] => 8217 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => answer this [time] => 2002-12-08 04:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When your hair is gray
and mine completely gone,
will we still be in love,
will we still get in on?
Wrinkled old lovers
doing the please hurry up,
or young in our own eyes
drinking from each other’s cup.
Will we have time to find
what it means to age,
will our lives be long?
Will our love be a cage
for two hungry souls
pacing in captivity:
or dreamers holding hands
walking sands along the sea?
All answers lie before us,
hidden by what’s yet to be.
Answer this and we begin:
“Will you marry me?”
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answer this

Contributed by darkeyedman on Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When your hair is gray
and mine completely gone,
will we still be in love,
will we still get in on?
Wrinkled old lovers
doing the please hurry up,
or young in our own eyes
drinking from each other’s cup.
Will we have time to find
what it means to age,
will our lives be long?
Will our love be a cage
for two hungry souls
pacing in captivity:
or dreamers holding hands
walking sands along the sea?
All answers lie before us,
hidden by what’s yet to be.
Answer this and we begin:
“Will you marry me?”

Copyright Â© darkeyedman ... [ 2002-12-08 04:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: answer this (User Rating: 1 )
by Roshie on Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 05:42:42 AM AEST
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awwwwwww this poem is absolutely booootiful! Keep writing! :)

Re: answer this (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 07:17:55 AM AEST
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Yeah, I love it too. I'm a sucker for romance...

Re: answer this (User Rating: 1 )
by KiEme on Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 08:36:48 AM AEST
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It's adorable.

Amy Marie

Re: answer this (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 11:04:25 AM AEST
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Awww this is so beautiful...were you really asking someone to marry you?? i want to see her answer!!!! lol...this is so beautiful it brought tears to my eyes, i think it's beautiful and here i've been wanting to see a poem of someone proposing to another...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: answer this (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 11:33:28 PM AEST
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soo pretty!
I love it
Always
Amy

Re: answer this (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 11:33:38 PM AEST
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soo pretty!
I love it
Always
Amy

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