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Have no home or no safe place,
They hang there suspended,
From reality they have descended.

They are lost & alone in the world,
They are naked & forever unfurled,
Exposed to hurt & endless pain,
Everything to lose, nothing to gain.

They search for a place to hide,
Search the lands so vast & wide,
Failing to find somewhere to get shelter,
Instead they plummet down this unforgiving helter skelter.

They remain cold & needing life,
But only suffering this grief & strife,
Eyes without a face live alone,
Never love or compassion are they shown.

Restlessly they wander,
Through their mind they do ponder,
Do they not deserve comfort & love?
Are they only worthy of a kick or a shove?

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Eyes Without A Face

Contributed by pixie on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Eyes without a face,
Have no home or no safe place,
They hang there suspended,
From reality they have descended.

They are lost & alone in the world,
They are naked & forever unfurled,
Exposed to hurt & endless pain,
Everything to lose, nothing to gain.

They search for a place to hide,
Search the lands so vast & wide,
Failing to find somewhere to get shelter,
Instead they plummet down this unforgiving helter skelter.

They remain cold & needing life,
But only suffering this grief & strife,
Eyes without a face live alone,
Never love or compassion are they shown.

Restlessly they wander,
Through their mind they do ponder,
Do they not deserve comfort & love?
Are they only worthy of a kick or a shove?

Copyright © pixie ... [ 2005-01-30 14:07:49]
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Re: Eyes Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:12:09 PM AEST
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The title caught me (I love the song by the same name!). How well you expressed the lonliness that lots of people feel. Hope this is *not* what you are feeling at this point. Touching write, Pixie! Hugs!

Re: Eyes Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:30:10 PM AEST
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this is so human it hurts... excellent moving piece, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Eyes Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:57:03 PM AEST
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what can i say about this that the others didn't tell you already.
*wonders for a moment*
This is really something Kriss the whole write was just sad and emotional. I liked it.

Jane x

Re: Eyes Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by subchild on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:41:10 PM AEST
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This is so great..Your flow and the feeling you have here I simply love. Much peace and love here.

Re: Eyes Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:00:39 PM AEST
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once again u grace these pages with your poetic prowes, welcome back pixie, and ty 4 your ever so
inspiering words of beauty . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Eyes Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetoccasion29 on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:02:41 PM AEST
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beautiful write,loved the flow of it.

Re: Eyes Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by lovesucks on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:48:33 PM AEST
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Awesome!!

Re: Eyes Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:35:58 PM AEST
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Nice poem. I hope you really are not feeling this way.

Spazzo

Re: Eyes Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:30:16 PM AEST
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eyes without a face.. intresting pix.. how did you think of it? say..if you comment on my poetry..do me a favor and leave out the star thingie..the vote? someone is giving me 1(s)..I don't know why..they won't leave a comment or anything..to tell me why they think my poem sucks..but I'm trying to narrow it down..thanks..great to have you back and great write..

Re: Eyes Without A Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:20:08 AM AEST
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Ladyfawn is right this write really move me.
Welcome back pixie girl.Miss reading your poems.

hugs

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