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Array ( [sid] => 81658 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => GOTH SLAVES [time] => 2005-01-26 23:22:21 [hometext] => to all you people lost in your darkness---join the light--no time for negativity --in dis time and age-- [bodytext] => SELF INDUCED ESTEEM
BRINGING YOU CLOSER
TO YOUR POWERFULL DREAM
DIVISION OF THOUGHTS
CONCEALMENT OF GOTHS
PROBLEMS UNADRESSED
KEEPING YOU DEPRESSED
FIND THE LIGHT
FORGET THE NIGHT
GET OFF THE WAGON
BRING THE DRAGON
THE SCENE
UNREAL
ORIGINALITY WAS SCARCE
AMONG THE CREATURES OF BELTS
FETISH DREAMS
IMMORAL THEMES
GATHERING OF SINS
SHOW FULL OF GRINS
HER DEVIOUS WAYS
KEPT ME AMAZED
STARING FROM DISTANCE
AT THE NEGATIVE PLAGUE [comments] => 9 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 69 [informant] => KOZMICSPIRID [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => poets )

GOTH SLAVES

Contributed by KOZMICSPIRID on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:22:21 PM in AEST
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SELF INDUCED ESTEEM
BRINGING YOU CLOSER
TO YOUR POWERFULL DREAM
DIVISION OF THOUGHTS
CONCEALMENT OF GOTHS
PROBLEMS UNADRESSED
KEEPING YOU DEPRESSED
FIND THE LIGHT
FORGET THE NIGHT
GET OFF THE WAGON
BRING THE DRAGON
THE SCENE
UNREAL
ORIGINALITY WAS SCARCE
AMONG THE CREATURES OF BELTS
FETISH DREAMS
IMMORAL THEMES
GATHERING OF SINS
SHOW FULL OF GRINS
HER DEVIOUS WAYS
KEPT ME AMAZED
STARING FROM DISTANCE
AT THE NEGATIVE PLAGUE

Copyright © KOZMICSPIRID ... [ 2005-01-26 23:22:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: GOTH SLAVES (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:27:52 PM AEST
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id rather die from the negative plague than be delusional, but i still liked your message and how you wrote this.

Re: GOTH SLAVES (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:40:39 PM AEST
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as a poem this is good, but the subject matter...I'll leave it alone, I don't want to offend you.

Re: GOTH SLAVES (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:50:47 PM AEST
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As good as the poem was I have to say that if there were no pain in me, I might not write at all if I could just be filled with contentment. No one ever accomplished much sitting around just being a cow. There has to be some need, some discontentment that drives people to do worthwhile things.
But you had to know we'd say this, didn't you?
All the best...

Re: GOTH SLAVES (User Rating: 1 )
by Bridget_theMidget_Powerz on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:03:39 AM AEST
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No thanks, I rather like the dark side.

Good poem though!

Re: GOTH SLAVES (User Rating: 1 )
by subchild on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:40:05 AM AEST
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You have no feel to your poem here..It reads like a goth how to list..

Re: GOTH SLAVES (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:15:28 PM AEST
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Shall we all become born again sheep as well..***** on your post.

Re: GOTH SLAVES (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:32:03 AM AEST
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I agree with subchild and afterdark.May I make a suggestion?{ok}how about you come out of the light and into the dark,jump on in hun the "blood" {I mean water,lol} is fine!

Re: GOTH SLAVES (User Rating: 1 )
by KOZMICSPIRID on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 04:09:25 PM AEST
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sounds like i hit a soft spot--or 2 ---word up4me---

Re: GOTH SLAVES (User Rating: 1 )
by Omen on Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 06:11:33 AM AEST
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Ying and Yang, The light needs the darkness to survive my friend .. Nice writting but I strong think this subject matter is not for you .... sorry.

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