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Array ( [sid] => 81525 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Wonder [time] => 2005-01-26 01:01:54 [hometext] => Comments are welcomed! =) [bodytext] => You once said I was your light on such a dark day
But being with you, makes my heart not want to stray
Is this real? How can I be sure?
Since I’ve met you, life’s been such a blur
Everything feels so right, and all in place
Almost makes it hard, for me to face
I’m so happy and yet so scared
But meeting you, it’s like a burst of fresh air
I don’t like to think, too deep into it
Because thoughts like “Will it last?” make me feel sick
So I occupy my mind, with thoughts about us
And do this all day long, from dawn to dusk
I imagine being held tight, tight in your arms
Looking up at the midnight sky, staring at the stars
Taking long walks, in such beautiful weather
Us always spending, so much time together
Doing the things, young people in love do
Because love isn’t for one, only just for two
It’s been a while, since someone’s given me butterflies
And I hope you believe me, cuz I cannot tell lies
I wonder what it’s like, to be one with you
Now that I think about it, I know that it will soon come true
Being wrapped up in your embrace, I look at your face
As you put a smile on my face, I go into a daze
You always ask me, what’s on my mind
But you make me speechless, I wish you could read my mind
Can I see us as a couple? Is that something I want?
Am I really sure? Or is this just a front?
What I do know, is actually nothing at all
Except that when I’m with you, I have such a ball [comments] => 6 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 2 [informant] => o7neves [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
I Wonder

Contributed by o7neves on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 01:01:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You once said I was your light on such a dark day
But being with you, makes my heart not want to stray
Is this real? How can I be sure?
Since I’ve met you, life’s been such a blur
Everything feels so right, and all in place
Almost makes it hard, for me to face
I’m so happy and yet so scared
But meeting you, it’s like a burst of fresh air
I don’t like to think, too deep into it
Because thoughts like “Will it last?” make me feel sick
So I occupy my mind, with thoughts about us
And do this all day long, from dawn to dusk
I imagine being held tight, tight in your arms
Looking up at the midnight sky, staring at the stars
Taking long walks, in such beautiful weather
Us always spending, so much time together
Doing the things, young people in love do
Because love isn’t for one, only just for two
It’s been a while, since someone’s given me butterflies
And I hope you believe me, cuz I cannot tell lies
I wonder what it’s like, to be one with you
Now that I think about it, I know that it will soon come true
Being wrapped up in your embrace, I look at your face
As you put a smile on my face, I go into a daze
You always ask me, what’s on my mind
But you make me speechless, I wish you could read my mind
Can I see us as a couple? Is that something I want?
Am I really sure? Or is this just a front?
What I do know, is actually nothing at all
Except that when I’m with you, I have such a ball




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Re: I Wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 01:19:59 AM AEST
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Wow, this is a heavenly beautifull masterpeice.
I think we all have our fears and that it's jus a natural thing if ya been burned before.
Very good write.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: I Wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by Dec2three198five on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 03:06:45 AM AEST
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I like this one. i can like actually feel it. 33


Re: I Wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by TheRaven on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:20:48 AM AEST
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i can relate, i have the same thoughts sometimes.

i've learned to just live in the moment, however...life is always better like that. you can deal with the hills when you get there, and you'll do it together, don't worry.

great write, keep it up.
the raven


Re: I Wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 07:34:03 PM AEST
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expect less and get more, and then live with it, or
die each day inside wondering why and where it and most of all, who's falt was it that it went bad, a
beautiful peice of writting . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: I Wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:55:52 PM AEST
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Beautiful! I love this!

Spazzo


Re: I Wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:46:59 PM AEST
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this was great, i loved it. keep up the good work :)

Curtis




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