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Array ( [sid] => 81297 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => musical suicide [time] => 2005-01-24 17:37:27 [hometext] => humming away my life [bodytext] => hiding myself by day
cutting myself by night
hating myself this way
killing myself inside

losing myself in ways
unseeing to the eye
dying day by day
till nothing is left to hide

wishing and praying
for death to come
cutting and slaying
my wrists while i hum

trying to hide
all thats inside
this cut up body
hearing rumors abt myself
and pretending theyre lies

pushin the limits
to death itself
but there is no limit
to killing myself

dont do what i do
dont say what i say
dont hear what i hum
and ill go away

sooner than ever
my time is coming
my throat severed
and ill still be humming

a beautiful tune
comes from my throat
as it is being slit
a wonderful melody a soft and low note
was my cue to die
and now this is it

now i lay
cold and dead
no more melody
to ease my dread
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musical suicide

Contributed by alwayslost on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 05:37:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

hiding myself by day
cutting myself by night
hating myself this way
killing myself inside

losing myself in ways
unseeing to the eye
dying day by day
till nothing is left to hide

wishing and praying
for death to come
cutting and slaying
my wrists while i hum

trying to hide
all thats inside
this cut up body
hearing rumors abt myself
and pretending theyre lies

pushin the limits
to death itself
but there is no limit
to killing myself

dont do what i do
dont say what i say
dont hear what i hum
and ill go away

sooner than ever
my time is coming
my throat severed
and ill still be humming

a beautiful tune
comes from my throat
as it is being slit
a wonderful melody a soft and low note
was my cue to die
and now this is it

now i lay
cold and dead
no more melody
to ease my dread

Copyright © alwayslost ... [ 2005-01-24 17:37:27]
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Re: musical suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:34:14 PM AEST
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If you want to commit suicide you can use my razor; it's electric, but you can hang yourself with the cord

Re: musical suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:43:03 PM AEST
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afterdark is funny, huh? I was going to say stick your head in my oven..it's electric but you can bake your brain.. you aren't dead you wrote two lines after..you can't fool me..

Re: musical suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:20:06 PM AEST
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I like the way you blended the music in with the suicidal thoughts. Not that I'm a big fan of this kind of dark, but your creativity here is very original!

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