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Array ( [sid] => 80944 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What you do to me [time] => 2005-01-22 01:02:54 [hometext] => man this is crazy all she needs to do is smile and i'm hooked.... [bodytext] => It's hard to compare what you do to my heart
when happiness lights your face and splits your lips apart
you reveal that smile, it makes me shake even now
it makes me sigh wanting to be near you somehow

I don't think you see the effect you have on me
nor do I think you have seen
How much your smile, lights up your eyes.
I’m forced to stop speaking, my voice having long since surrendered,
To you and your eyes, is it any small wonder,
that I fall silent when you start to pull near?
how I Just want to kiss you......take one small souvenir.

Not that it matters; I’m no longer surprised
That I was taken by you...and the light in your eyes [comments] => 5 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 2 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

What you do to me

Contributed by socialmisfit on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:02:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

It's hard to compare what you do to my heart
when happiness lights your face and splits your lips apart
you reveal that smile, it makes me shake even now
it makes me sigh wanting to be near you somehow

I don't think you see the effect you have on me
nor do I think you have seen
How much your smile, lights up your eyes.
I’m forced to stop speaking, my voice having long since surrendered,
To you and your eyes, is it any small wonder,
that I fall silent when you start to pull near?
how I Just want to kiss you......take one small souvenir.

Not that it matters; I’m no longer surprised
That I was taken by you...and the light in your eyes

Copyright Â© socialmisfit ... [ 2005-01-22 01:02:54]
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Re: What you do to me (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:06:20 AM AEST
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dangit stupid brain and fingers.... title is saposed to be What you do to me, not waht you do to me

SM

Re: What you do to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:14:38 AM AEST
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hi
aww,dude,this is so cute,i guess this is the side us girls dont see right at that moment,lol.but i know how u feel,all it takes is a look,a step closer,to get the chills,its an awesome feeling,yet again,maybe she does notice,she's just hiding it really good......good luck,& such a heartfelt write,keep it up.t/c.
love always,
andrea

Re: What you do to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:15:28 AM AEST
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lol thats a thought huh.nice job.

Re: What you do to me (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 05:17:37 AM AEST
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Aww thats such a sweet write, i adored it.

Jane x

Re: What you do to me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 02:25:04 AM AEST
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oh sooo sweet!! i love this! great style and flow too:) hugs n' love nessa

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