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Array ( [sid] => 80800 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please somebody help me! [time] => 2005-01-20 21:38:19 [hometext] => Please somebody help me! .. I need help .. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [bodytext] => I see you in pictures of parties you’ve attended and I didn’t
I hear your song on the radio every day
Your beautiful voice echoes throughout my mind
I see your face.. when I’m lying awake at night and I can’t sleep

I remember the times that I would call you and we’d talk…
About things that mattered, and about nothing at all
We both to each other - gave and received advice
You used to sing me to sleep

I would comfort you when you needed me
When you were stressed out or needed someone…
For the space of time you allowed me, I was there
Circumstances don’t always allow for things to be perfect
This I so truly know…
But God how I pray that things could’ve been different

You’re in my thoughts
You got under my skin dammit!
I can’t get you out and it hurts me so much
To know that I feel this way about you
And you don’t feel the same

I heard last night that you’re engaged now
To someone who no doubt loves you
But is foolish by allowing herself to be with you when you treat her the way you do
I wish that things were different

I wanted the opportunity to be with you… honestly I believe I still do
But you’d have to be faithful to me
I believe we could’ve been magnificent
After all… if we saw so much sparks when we first kissed
Being together would’ve been sheer bliss

Oh, what am I saying… I don’t think you even think about me
I wonder, do you?
God I miss you so much
I miss your smile, your kiss, your touch

I miss the way you saw right through me
You’d always know what to say
I honest-to-God have never met anyone like you
Who matches my personality like you do

I love you, I truly believe I do
I don’t know what I am going to do
You’re not the person I thought you were
And you never will be…
But that doesn’t mean I’ll stop loving you

Please, somebody help me! Get him out of my head, my heart!
Or no.. wait.. I’m not sure that’s what I really want…

- 20th January 2005 - [comments] => 2 [counter] => 307 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Marisa_A_sydney [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Please somebody help me!

Contributed by Marisa_A_sydney on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:38:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I see you in pictures of parties you’ve attended and I didn’t
I hear your song on the radio every day
Your beautiful voice echoes throughout my mind
I see your face.. when I’m lying awake at night and I can’t sleep

I remember the times that I would call you and we’d talk…
About things that mattered, and about nothing at all
We both to each other - gave and received advice
You used to sing me to sleep

I would comfort you when you needed me
When you were stressed out or needed someone…
For the space of time you allowed me, I was there
Circumstances don’t always allow for things to be perfect
This I so truly know…
But God how I pray that things could’ve been different

You’re in my thoughts
You got under my skin dammit!
I can’t get you out and it hurts me so much
To know that I feel this way about you
And you don’t feel the same

I heard last night that you’re engaged now
To someone who no doubt loves you
But is foolish by allowing herself to be with you when you treat her the way you do
I wish that things were different

I wanted the opportunity to be with you… honestly I believe I still do
But you’d have to be faithful to me
I believe we could’ve been magnificent
After all… if we saw so much sparks when we first kissed
Being together would’ve been sheer bliss

Oh, what am I saying… I don’t think you even think about me
I wonder, do you?
God I miss you so much
I miss your smile, your kiss, your touch

I miss the way you saw right through me
You’d always know what to say
I honest-to-God have never met anyone like you
Who matches my personality like you do

I love you, I truly believe I do
I don’t know what I am going to do
You’re not the person I thought you were
And you never will be…
But that doesn’t mean I’ll stop loving you

Please, somebody help me! Get him out of my head, my heart!
Or no.. wait.. I’m not sure that’s what I really want…

- 20th January 2005 -




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Re: Please somebody help me! (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 02:58:01 AM AEST
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great write, lots of emotion in this one. Having a confused heart is pretty rough sometimes, I know what that's like.

Curtis


Re: Please somebody help me! (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 01:15:23 PM AEST
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great peice of writting, sorry 4 your pain, could say more but some things r better left unsaid . . .

Dorian Chambers




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