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Array ( [sid] => 80302 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thank You [time] => 2005-01-17 17:17:35 [hometext] => A Look on the Bright Side [bodytext] => Hello God
It's me
Waiting for you
To set me free

So I can live a life that's new
A life of peace
A life with You

If I take my life
I know I'll fail
You'll banish me
To the innermost depths of Hell

So I'll just hid in my music
Until You come
And shiver from my tears
Until I become numb

Though the way's still not clear
I can suddenly see
You've given me a new hope
You believed in me

Thank You [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 19 [informant] => upomik [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Thank You

Contributed by upomik on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 05:17:35 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Hello God
It's me
Waiting for you
To set me free

So I can live a life that's new
A life of peace
A life with You

If I take my life
I know I'll fail
You'll banish me
To the innermost depths of Hell

So I'll just hid in my music
Until You come
And shiver from my tears
Until I become numb

Though the way's still not clear
I can suddenly see
You've given me a new hope
You believed in me

Thank You

Copyright © upomik ... [ 2005-01-17 17:17:35]
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Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 05:23:40 PM AEST
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Excellent write! So inspirational.
Nice job.

Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 05:24:04 PM AEST
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this is true God is always there when you need Him congratulations on finding Him and a way to cope with this humdrum world, keep the faith and be strong.

we all could do good in taking our example from you welcome to His family you are always welcome here. keep writing, God bless

wolfman

Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by TheRaven on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 05:48:32 PM AEST
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i know where you're coming from with this...i am having difficulty finding my way in the dark to Him as well. Congrats on holding onto your faith, maybe i'll reach mine again soon....great write.
the raven

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