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Array ( [sid] => 80265 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sadistic Romance [time] => 2005-01-17 14:14:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The air around grew frigid cold
Her tender body he did hold
His eyes they shown with dark intention
Far too late did she notice his deception
Across his face spread a sadistic smile
He had not had a challenge in such awhile

With his icy hands he caressed her skin
Yet she would not give into this unwanted sin
Struggling to free herself from him
She stayed persistent and would not give in
He merely smiled, his sadistic grin

Upon her neck he made his mark
Her crimson blood gleamed in the dark
He cleaned the wound and licked it dry
As she let out a feeble cry
On his lips her blood did stain
And continue he did to cause her pain

Digging her sharp nails into his arm
Was her frail attempt to cause him harm
He merely smiled, enjoying the pain
And once again bit through to her vein
Watching her blood as it slowly did drain
Lusting for more torment to gain

And then he pulled her closer to him
Yet not so easily would she give in
Pushing away from his grip
Onto the floor she did slip
Lifted up she was placed on the bed
Not a single tear did she shed
As onto her lips he pressed his
And forced her into a rough kiss

Running out of breath she pulled away
Yet she was drawn back in and the kiss sustained
Eventually she had broken free
The once innocent boy again she did see
His skin had grown pale, his eyes filled with concern
What had happened that day she has yet to learn
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Sadistic Romance

Contributed by eternalnight4x on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:14:40 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



The air around grew frigid cold
Her tender body he did hold
His eyes they shown with dark intention
Far too late did she notice his deception
Across his face spread a sadistic smile
He had not had a challenge in such awhile

With his icy hands he caressed her skin
Yet she would not give into this unwanted sin
Struggling to free herself from him
She stayed persistent and would not give in
He merely smiled, his sadistic grin

Upon her neck he made his mark
Her crimson blood gleamed in the dark
He cleaned the wound and licked it dry
As she let out a feeble cry
On his lips her blood did stain
And continue he did to cause her pain

Digging her sharp nails into his arm
Was her frail attempt to cause him harm
He merely smiled, enjoying the pain
And once again bit through to her vein
Watching her blood as it slowly did drain
Lusting for more torment to gain

And then he pulled her closer to him
Yet not so easily would she give in
Pushing away from his grip
Onto the floor she did slip
Lifted up she was placed on the bed
Not a single tear did she shed
As onto her lips he pressed his
And forced her into a rough kiss

Running out of breath she pulled away
Yet she was drawn back in and the kiss sustained
Eventually she had broken free
The once innocent boy again she did see
His skin had grown pale, his eyes filled with concern
What had happened that day she has yet to learn




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Re: Sadistic Romance (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:21:27 PM AEST
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Excellently written, the whole poem just flows, not once did the rhyming seem forced. This is on the darker side, but i'm a dark person I enjoyed this alot. I really love this poem.


Re: Sadistic Romance (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:04:38 PM AEST
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Had me spellbound throughout! Very awesome read and write. Nice job!

Laurie




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