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Array ( [sid] => 80054 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wish I Could Take It Back [time] => 2005-01-16 02:18:19 [hometext] => This poem is supposed to be about this one time I said something I shouldn't have, and now I lost a friend... [bodytext] => I wish I could take back what I said
I didn't mean to make you feel mislead
I should have said it differently
I wish I could make it more friendly

I didn't want to make you mad
Your expression ended up making me sad
Now I'm at the brink of tears
Now I'm in a fit of fear

I made a terrible mistake
My fear feels like it will soon outbreak
Will you still be my friend?
What I said wasn't meant to offend

I don't want to lose someone like you
We have been friends forever
You know that it's true
You and I were so clever when we were together

I have said stupid things like when I would boast
But this one thing really hurts the most
I wish I could take it all back
But now you, my friend, have turned your back

I wish we would smile and laugh
Like it was a joke, but even I can do this math
I just lost my best buddy
This would never be funny

I look down beginning to cry
Who knew a friendship like ours would die?
I didn't see it coming
I wish I could take it all back [comments] => 8 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Kuro_Mirai [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Wish I Could Take It Back

Contributed by Kuro_Mirai on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:18:19 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I wish I could take back what I said
I didn't mean to make you feel mislead
I should have said it differently
I wish I could make it more friendly

I didn't want to make you mad
Your expression ended up making me sad
Now I'm at the brink of tears
Now I'm in a fit of fear

I made a terrible mistake
My fear feels like it will soon outbreak
Will you still be my friend?
What I said wasn't meant to offend

I don't want to lose someone like you
We have been friends forever
You know that it's true
You and I were so clever when we were together

I have said stupid things like when I would boast
But this one thing really hurts the most
I wish I could take it all back
But now you, my friend, have turned your back

I wish we would smile and laugh
Like it was a joke, but even I can do this math
I just lost my best buddy
This would never be funny

I look down beginning to cry
Who knew a friendship like ours would die?
I didn't see it coming
I wish I could take it all back

Copyright © Kuro_Mirai ... [ 2005-01-16 02:18:19]
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Re: Wish I Could Take It Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:22:36 AM AEST
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Its sad to hear this, this made me think of something they said in equilibrium.
"I am a poor man, all i have are my dreams. I lay my dreams underneath your feet, tread carefully, because you tread on my dreams."

Re: Wish I Could Take It Back (User Rating: 1 )
by mia on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:48:23 AM AEST
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Nice poem, i loved it

Re: Wish I Could Take It Back (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 05:15:06 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
A friend that can't forgive then ya don't need around.
I do know the felling tho. We all say things we don't mean. don't be so hard on yourself.
huggs,
emy

Re: Wish I Could Take It Back (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:10:54 AM AEST
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I see some foreced ryming on the poem, but sometimes that cant be helped. I did however enjoy this write. Thanks for posting.

Jane x

Re: Wish I Could Take It Back (User Rating: 1 )
by dreaming-of-your-love on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:51:55 AM AEST
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i love it it sounds just what happen to me and my friend
dreaming-of-your- love

Re: Wish I Could Take It Back (User Rating: 1 )
by sean88 on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:20:55 AM AEST
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Really nice poem! Hope you get your friend back.

sean xxx

Re: Wish I Could Take It Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:48:56 AM AEST
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another excellent write, though you need to work on not forcing rhymes as much.

Re: Wish I Could Take It Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Moshi_Moshi on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:10:13 PM AEST
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Great job!!!!

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