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Array ( [sid] => 79801 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Horrified [time] => 2005-01-13 20:42:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => H-Hastily mumbling, you walk along the dark alleyway
Ho-A young budding flower, you find it
Hor-You lay it down gently on the bed
Horr-She spreads her beautiful petals for you.
Horri-Terrified, but she lets you suck her nectar,
Horrif-You take all she is and all she has
Horrifi-Dripping in sweat...
Horrifie-The flower closes up again
Horrified-And you will find her there once more tomorrow night.
Petrified and Insane
This Whorifying game. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 293 [topic] => 7 [informant] => assassinatorgirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

Horrified

Contributed by assassinatorgirl on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:42:05 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

H-Hastily mumbling, you walk along the dark alleyway
Ho-A young budding flower, you find it
Hor-You lay it down gently on the bed
Horr-She spreads her beautiful petals for you.
Horri-Terrified, but she lets you suck her nectar,
Horrif-You take all she is and all she has
Horrifi-Dripping in sweat...
Horrifie-The flower closes up again
Horrified-And you will find her there once more tomorrow night.
Petrified and Insane
This Whorifying game.

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Re: Horrified (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:06:02 PM AEST
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::puzzled look:: the concept is fine, but i dont think its written in such a way as to make it funny. i think thats just because of the fact i was paying more attention to the added letters than anything else. ::shrugs::

Re: Horrified (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 10:19:44 PM AEST
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I found no humor in this write, I'm glad you could. Much peace.

Re: Horrified (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:20:14 PM AEST
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I didn't really think this was funny but it is still good.

Spazzo

Re: Horrified (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 02:07:02 AM AEST
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You've always supported my work and I appreciate that. I just wonder if perhaps you clicked the wrong topic. Nevertheless, I think it was very cleverly done and it definitely seems to have a message. That's no life to live, in my opinion. I say damn good job. I just didn't catch the humor.

Take care,

Tim

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