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Array ( [sid] => 7961 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => while you were sleeping [time] => 2002-12-04 22:20:00 [hometext] => for my children. [bodytext] => While you both was sleeping I watched you both breathe
Suddenly knew that I could never leave
While you both were sleeping I watched you both wriggle
The pure sight of it started to make me giggle
While you both were sleeping I gently touched you both on the head
As I watched you both peacefully laying there in bed
While you both were sleeping I felt glad that you both were there
And knowing that for you both I will always love and care
I watched you both learn and watched you both grow
Teaching whats right and wrong so you both know
The things I see like you both take your first step in walking
Watching closely as I see you both learn to start talking
I couldnt help being happy or to smile with delight
That I watched both my children sleep soundly tonight
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 23 [informant] => lil_angel_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
while you were sleeping

Contributed by lil_angel_eyes on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



While you both was sleeping I watched you both breathe
Suddenly knew that I could never leave
While you both were sleeping I watched you both wriggle
The pure sight of it started to make me giggle
While you both were sleeping I gently touched you both on the head
As I watched you both peacefully laying there in bed
While you both were sleeping I felt glad that you both were there
And knowing that for you both I will always love and care
I watched you both learn and watched you both grow
Teaching whats right and wrong so you both know
The things I see like you both take your first step in walking
Watching closely as I see you both learn to start talking
I couldnt help being happy or to smile with delight
That I watched both my children sleep soundly tonight




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Re: while you were sleeping (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 09:54:17 AM AEST
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This was so beautiful & sweet for your children,they will love this one day! Christina


Re: while you were sleeping (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 11:03:28 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful....thanks for sharing this one...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: while you were sleeping (User Rating: 1 )
by Jule on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 05:07:03 PM AEST
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that was really beautiful




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