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This is the day of fear
My heart's forever broken
Due to all the shallow souls
Now I close my heart forever
To lock out all the pain
You've hurt me so, I shiver
For I love the one I hate
As I begin to walk away
My soul begins to fade
The world has become a shadow
Swallowed by darkness
As hate begins to dominate
The soul I nearly lost
My soul is set on fire
And now I burn away [comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 32 [informant] => shamateur [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

What Have You Done?

Contributed by shamateur on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:23:37 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

This is the day of judgment
This is the day of fear
My heart's forever broken
Due to all the shallow souls
Now I close my heart forever
To lock out all the pain
You've hurt me so, I shiver
For I love the one I hate
As I begin to walk away
My soul begins to fade
The world has become a shadow
Swallowed by darkness
As hate begins to dominate
The soul I nearly lost
My soul is set on fire
And now I burn away

Copyright © shamateur ... [ 2005-01-11 21:23:37]
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Re: What Have You Done? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:32:05 PM AEST
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its okay, but it could be better, just like everything else in the world. i think this was kind of too random for the point or message to get across clearly. stanzas would be nice also.

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