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Array ( [sid] => 79329 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This is My Fate [time] => 2005-01-10 18:51:48 [hometext] => uhh random poem, need love lol, enjoy n plz comment!! xxoo [bodytext] => In this soul there are no words to find,
When I think it's completely blank in my mind,
No more words to explain emotions I feel,
Unable to tell this fantasy from whats real,
But I must escape this world that I inhabit,
I need to get away where the sky's the limit,
Where anything is possible and there's peace,
No sadness or hate just the capability of release,
No tears fall and happiness will reign forever,
And you may ask when it ends, well never,
In this place you love me for everything I am,
Into immaginations so wonderful I have swam,
I just wish they were real for once in my world,
Where fantasies did not have to be unfurled,
I've spent too many hours crying these tears,
How much of life have I wasted, how many years?
I know you're out there somewhere feeling as I do,
Just know that I'm here and I'm waiting for you too,
I will wait until the end, until my last dying breath,
Until the last second and I'm on the brink of death,
These games of make believe are getting so tiering,
As the dreams and fantasies are slowly expiring,
Falling back against this matress as I stare up,
Crying as I stare blankly sheer out of luck,
Never getting ahead just always falling behind,
Sadness so strong continues keeping me blind,
I wish there were someway but now it is too late,
And so I accept this life because this is my fate.

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This is My Fate

Contributed by XxNights_ChildxX on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 06:51:48 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

In this soul there are no words to find,
When I think it's completely blank in my mind,
No more words to explain emotions I feel,
Unable to tell this fantasy from whats real,
But I must escape this world that I inhabit,
I need to get away where the sky's the limit,
Where anything is possible and there's peace,
No sadness or hate just the capability of release,
No tears fall and happiness will reign forever,
And you may ask when it ends, well never,
In this place you love me for everything I am,
Into immaginations so wonderful I have swam,
I just wish they were real for once in my world,
Where fantasies did not have to be unfurled,
I've spent too many hours crying these tears,
How much of life have I wasted, how many years?
I know you're out there somewhere feeling as I do,
Just know that I'm here and I'm waiting for you too,
I will wait until the end, until my last dying breath,
Until the last second and I'm on the brink of death,
These games of make believe are getting so tiering,
As the dreams and fantasies are slowly expiring,
Falling back against this matress as I stare up,
Crying as I stare blankly sheer out of luck,
Never getting ahead just always falling behind,
Sadness so strong continues keeping me blind,
I wish there were someway but now it is too late,
And so I accept this life because this is my fate.

Copyright © XxNights_ChildxX ... [ 2005-01-10 18:51:48]
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Re: This is My Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:00:52 PM AEST
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Awesome poem!! Great flow...I really enjoyed it.

Re: This is My Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:19:19 PM AEST
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Good write!
=Jen=

Re: This is My Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:57:14 PM AEST
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wow, this was excellent to read, well done...uve potrayed ur feelings of loneliness and sadness well....and i kno how u feel but chin up, there must be somewhere out there for us! ;)

Re: This is My Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by eden on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 03:45:04 PM AEST
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this one's a little hapier than the last one, lol why don't you write a poem about our little near death experience on the ice. That was fun. lol but good job, i like this one.
-eden

Re: This is My Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 03:32:11 PM AEST
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Well written...can't wait for the new stuff to come out.. take care

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