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Array ( [sid] => 79134 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please [time] => 2005-01-09 09:13:02 [hometext] => I wrote this at 1.52am!!!! lol so if its a bit weird... Sorry?! [bodytext] => Please God, Give me the strength,
To have what it takes to carry on,
Why am I still going to such a length?!
When I know deep down my soul has gone...

God, what did I do that was so bad to deserve this?!
Why isn’t everything I do... perfect?!
Why do I have to put up with such crap?!
Lord can you just open up a little... gap
For me...
To Squeeze
Through...
Please?!!

I guess this is a kind of plead,
I am sick and tired of them watching me bleed!
I guess I will have to succeed,
I have so much more things to complete,
I swear I’m not trying to compete...

I don’t deserve this,
I am always in S**t,
No matter what I do,
I have GOT TO pull through,

So PLEASE God, Give me the strength, that I need to carry on!!!
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 61 [informant] => BuggY [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Please

Contributed by BuggY on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:13:02 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Please God, Give me the strength,
To have what it takes to carry on,
Why am I still going to such a length?!
When I know deep down my soul has gone...

God, what did I do that was so bad to deserve this?!
Why isn’t everything I do... perfect?!
Why do I have to put up with such crap?!
Lord can you just open up a little... gap
For me...
To Squeeze
Through...
Please?!!

I guess this is a kind of plead,
I am sick and tired of them watching me bleed!
I guess I will have to succeed,
I have so much more things to complete,
I swear I’m not trying to compete...

I don’t deserve this,
I am always in S**t,
No matter what I do,
I have GOT TO pull through,

So PLEASE God, Give me the strength, that I need to carry on!!!




Copyright © BuggY ... [ 2005-01-09 09:13:02]
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Re: Please (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:18:41 AM AEST
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I can tell you wrote it after 1 am
Not bad really..Spell check I seem to keep telling ppl really works..It kind of drains away in some places..Other then all that good stuff..Not bad.


Re: Please (User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:12:43 PM AEST
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very deep buggy... well written, but yes i agree it may have come out a bit better if you werent half asleep lol... keep it up

love always,
mexy




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