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Upon the feelings you hold
Relax and let the friendship bloom
Don't rush, it's better slow, I am told.
Do you know what's really in your heart,
Can you separate the feelings, each as their own;
How can you say that you really love me
When friendship and caring is all we've shown?
Sometimes I feel that it's not me you desire
Yet your touch tells me so much more;
My confusion is embedded so deep within
And I'm trying to realize what you're in this for.
Ever so gently I feel myself falling deeper
And I wonder if you'll be there when....
I'm falling in love though my mind says go slow...
I can't go through heartache and pain again. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 48 [informant] => purplerosepoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Untitled

Contributed by purplerosepoet on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Take a moment to reflect
Upon the feelings you hold
Relax and let the friendship bloom
Don't rush, it's better slow, I am told.
Do you know what's really in your heart,
Can you separate the feelings, each as their own;
How can you say that you really love me
When friendship and caring is all we've shown?
Sometimes I feel that it's not me you desire
Yet your touch tells me so much more;
My confusion is embedded so deep within
And I'm trying to realize what you're in this for.
Ever so gently I feel myself falling deeper
And I wonder if you'll be there when....
I'm falling in love though my mind says go slow...
I can't go through heartache and pain again.

Copyright © purplerosepoet ... [ 2002-12-04 01:00:00]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by flirtyrockstar on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 01:32:07 AM AEST
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I really like this poem. You did a good job fitting all the details into your poem. Keep writing I cant wait to read more.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by purplerosepoet on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 10:13:37 AM AEST
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Thanks for commenting. Do you know how I can send this poem to another site I am a member of? I did not know that they copyright here so now I have to find a way to get my poems over here. so that I can get them all copyrighted.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 08:44:58 PM AEST
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This is beautiful....i love the way you ended the poem to...thanks for sharing this one it's beautiful...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by coolsmcniel on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 08:59:02 PM AEST
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This is very well written. I enjoyed reading it. I hope to hear more from you.

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