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Dim with little light
The fireplace glowing
Outside it’s snowing
Curled up like a ball
Waiting for your call
I try to stay strong
But the wait feels so long

When will the phone ring?
My eyes begin to sting
Holding back the tears
I think of all my fears

I pick up the phone
Yep there’s a dial tone
I want to hear your voice
You’ve left me no choice
I want to see your face
Wish you were here at my place
I want to smell your cologne
Reminds me of when we’re all alone
I want to taste all of you
Cuz you like it when I do
I want to feel your body
But you’re out at a party…

My heart feels like it’s breaking
Can you please stop the aching?
Why can’t you just be stable?
Then we’d be able
To be together you and I
Concentrating on our lives

But no, that can’t be
Cuz you’re not ready for me
I’m ready for you
But am I, is this really true?
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Am I Ready?

Contributed by O7NeVeS on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:01:18 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

The cold winter night
Dim with little light
The fireplace glowing
Outside it’s snowing
Curled up like a ball
Waiting for your call
I try to stay strong
But the wait feels so long

When will the phone ring?
My eyes begin to sting
Holding back the tears
I think of all my fears

I pick up the phone
Yep there’s a dial tone
I want to hear your voice
You’ve left me no choice
I want to see your face
Wish you were here at my place
I want to smell your cologne
Reminds me of when we’re all alone
I want to taste all of you
Cuz you like it when I do
I want to feel your body
But you’re out at a party…

My heart feels like it’s breaking
Can you please stop the aching?
Why can’t you just be stable?
Then we’d be able
To be together you and I
Concentrating on our lives

But no, that can’t be
Cuz you’re not ready for me
I’m ready for you
But am I, is this really true?

Copyright Â© O7NeVeS ... [ 2005-01-08 20:01:18]
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Re: Am I Ready? (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:23:31 PM AEST
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that is exactly what happend to my friend except she was ingaged to someone that is in the army and in iraq

Re: Am I Ready? (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:41:57 PM AEST
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Ready and Waiting?

Dressed in Ready..

Why Can't You Just Be..

just some ideas...:-)

Re: Am I Ready? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 06:09:57 PM AEST
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Great write! I enjoyed reading it!

Re: Am I Ready? (User Rating: 1 )
by Dec2three198five on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:29:28 PM AEST
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oh i love this poem. I definitely get the meaning of this poem. Very nice. 33

Re: Am I Ready? (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:52:44 AM AEST
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the picture this made in my mind was really sad...poor little tanya lying in bed, curled up in a blanket...waiting next to the phone, so depressing :( i hope he called u, it would be so sad to think u were like that for long...great poem, i really liked this one.

Curtis

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