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Array ( [sid] => 78738 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She's Better [time] => 2005-01-06 15:15:13 [hometext] => My friend purposely went out with the guy that i have feelings for. He also happens to be one of my best friends. That's what this is about. [bodytext] => one on one you act real sweet
but around her you're no treat
you always wonder if im mad at you
and your girlfriend always wonders too
the answer is no but the answer is yes
cuz i don't think you two are best
some people say i'm rude some say conceited
but i won't be stopped until my goals are completed.
i have goals in love and goals in life
but i don't want them to cause a strife
no matter what i'll be your friend
i just need my broken heart to mend.
so let me ignore you
but know i adore you
i know that she won
but the impossible can be done
i know that she won
but i won't be outdone
I'll climb all the mountains
I'll swim in all the fountains
I'll battle a croc
I'll undo the lock
There's nothing i won't do
As long as i can get to you.
But no one sees what you mean to me
to your heart, i don't hold the key
I'm afraid I'll never get my chance
I don't even get a glance
I'm always second best
never as good as the rest
But I'll have to live
never to get but always to give
but i just want you to know
You are the one that makes my eyes glow.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 22 [informant] => oxluvlaughingxo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
She's Better

Contributed by oxluvlaughingxo on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:15:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



one on one you act real sweet
but around her you're no treat
you always wonder if im mad at you
and your girlfriend always wonders too
the answer is no but the answer is yes
cuz i don't think you two are best
some people say i'm rude some say conceited
but i won't be stopped until my goals are completed.
i have goals in love and goals in life
but i don't want them to cause a strife
no matter what i'll be your friend
i just need my broken heart to mend.
so let me ignore you
but know i adore you
i know that she won
but the impossible can be done
i know that she won
but i won't be outdone
I'll climb all the mountains
I'll swim in all the fountains
I'll battle a croc
I'll undo the lock
There's nothing i won't do
As long as i can get to you.
But no one sees what you mean to me
to your heart, i don't hold the key
I'm afraid I'll never get my chance
I don't even get a glance
I'm always second best
never as good as the rest
But I'll have to live
never to get but always to give
but i just want you to know
You are the one that makes my eyes glow.




Copyright © oxluvlaughingxo ... [ 2005-01-06 15:15:13]
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Re: She's Better (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:35:20 PM AEST
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I'm sorry...well expressed, and even polite.....I'd have gone off my handle...


Re: She's Better (User Rating: 1 )
by oxluvlaughingxo on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:11:34 PM AEST
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Please leave me comments, tell me what you think! Thanks.




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