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Array ( [sid] => 78544 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Theres nothing left to see [time] => 2005-01-05 09:38:43 [hometext] => I don't know if I like this poem. Comments greatly appreciated. [bodytext] => Im tired
Of trying to
Break free
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Im tired
Of being someone
Elses property
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Im tired
Of people just
Disgarding me
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Im tired
Of trying to
Beg and plea
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Im tired
Of it never being a case
Of we
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Im tired
Of trying to be something
I'll never be
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Im tired
Of you
Never loving me
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Let the body hit the floor
Let the body hit the floor
Let the body hit the floor
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see
Theres nothing left to see [comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Kitty_cat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Theres nothing left to see

Contributed by Kitty_cat on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:38:43 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Im tired
Of trying to
Break free
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Im tired
Of being someone
Elses property
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Im tired
Of people just
Disgarding me
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Im tired
Of trying to
Beg and plea
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Im tired
Of it never being a case
Of we
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Im tired
Of trying to be something
I'll never be
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Im tired
Of you
Never loving me
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see

Let the body hit the floor
Let the body hit the floor
Let the body hit the floor
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see
Theres nothing left to see

Copyright © Kitty_cat ... [ 2005-01-05 09:38:43]
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Re: Theres nothing left to see (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:44:42 AM AEST
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It was good..But try not asking for comments it sounds worse to do so..I would have given you a comment regardless though..Reminds me of a song as well..But this is good.

Re: Theres nothing left to see (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty_cat on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:51:21 AM AEST
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thanks. last time I didnt ask for any comments I didnt get any, so I thought I better ask this time!

cat xx

Re: Theres nothing left to see (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:53:44 AM AEST
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Yeah...this also actually reminds me of a song. I dunno what song. lol. But this is vaguely familiar. Especially the end. Maybe it the repeated line.
I like this. The repeated line works well, but doesn't make it boring.

Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx

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